Towards heaven, I turned my head
With the night sky, dark and red
An arrangement I did behold
Precious more than a thousand gold
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The night stars lined up in play
Shining brighter than the sun of day
As if they were willing to play a game
And formed a constellation of your name
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Then I turned my head to the other side
And my smile grew further wide
The brightest stars of the endless space
Drew a constellation of your face
Thanks for the like on my page Frank 🙂 be sure to follow me pal, need all the support. Look forward to reading your posts
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Welcome. Thanks for the comment
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Nice job of rhyming. I usually use prose, so I don’t need to use time on rhyming, but then we are all different, aren’t we? I like the length as well, I could read it and keep my concentration, which increases the enjoyment as well. Great job!
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I do not usually use rhyming, but as you mentioned we are all different. This one rhymed beautifully.
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Great poem!
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Love this one!
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Hi Frank and thank you for liking my post. I am new on WP can you please tell me how you found my blog? Thanks
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Welcome. I found your post through WordPress Reader
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I need to study deeper. Thanks again!
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Don’t worry. Things will come to you. It won’t take long
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Thoughtful, moving sentiment. The muse holds strong your gaze.
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Wow! This is really nice 😇
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Beautiful….!!👌👌
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Welcome!!
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Take care, my friend
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Sure, you too take care!😄
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Great expression
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O my goodness. This is awesome. Really good. Especially the last verse, beautiful
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Your poems are delightful.
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Very beautiful poem 🤗!
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You should see some of my poems that I will upload tonight
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Will do
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Reblogged this on HS Florilège and commented:
❤
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Thank you for liking my first post. Really appreciated.
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Welcome. Have a nice day
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You have a way with words
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I like this poem, and I love rhyming. Also it has a nice rhythm to it. And of course, the sentiment expressed was heavenly. (yep, pun intentional.)
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Precious indeed 😇
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Yes thanks
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