We’re so apart and it hurts too much
I can’t handle the pain
I wonder if you’re doing all right
Nights are lonely and days are long
Makes it hard to stay strong
I talk to myself sometimes all night
A love must die or a heart’ll bleed
There is a gap left by your light
There’s a hole in my soul
Only you can heal me now with your touch
Sometimes it rains, sometimes it snows
But it’s all the same to me
Without you, life is incomplete
A love must die so the other could breed
Call my name and set me free
Take my heart away
It isn’t much but it’s all I’ve got
Maybe together we won’t last a day
Unless we give our all
Now my fate lies in your heart
Life is short and love is pure
Some things are never meant to be
A love must die so a life could breathe

Powerful and beautiful words.
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So very powerful š¤
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Thank you.
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I broke my heart for eternity…..that wasn’t my first choice….
Your poetry is breathtaking…..thank you for sharing something I have been wishing of hearing!
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You are most welcome.
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Love this poem so much! You are really gifted! š
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Thank you.
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This is so deep.. wow
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Thanks.
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Wow, i like that to a love must die so a life can breathe. Unfortunately. Im not sure a love can die, and if it can that dying love might sufficate the life write out of me.
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Love your poems and raw honesty.
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Thank you.
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a love must die .. so nice
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on travelgirl111.
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how do you write so good frank? what a great line “A love must die so the other could breed
Call my name and set me free……”
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I just write as I feel. Fortunately, people like and relate to it
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Love see’s, love free’s, love be’s. She doesn’t need the other, but she loves anyway.
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I second you totally… Loved every bit of it.
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Thank you
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Love the last comment.. ā¤
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I very much like the wisdom of the line: A love must die so a life could breathe.
Thanks for this.
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Thanks and welcome
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let it die
once more
let it live
if you are sure
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Smart
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Have we met before? Your name sounds very familiar. And this poem, I am going through similar feelings right now, when I read it, it seemed like it might as well have been written by me
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Well we all go through this at some point in life
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The ‘other’ to breed? :0 what an interesting story haha… take care.
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Love this poem, perfectly touches deeply on that sense of loss of not having the one you love in your life.. Beaut’!
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Thank you
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Nice one!!
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Wow.. deep! Love this
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Thank you
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I wish i could double likeš
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That is super sweet
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Incredibly beautiful!
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Thank you
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Side note: I thought I had followed you, but I guess I didn’t. I was wondering where your posts when. š They’re beautiful, I’m reading them now. (:
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Oh thank you for the compliment. You are far too kind
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wow this was deep
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Thanks
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I like this one – it is absolutely beautiful and touching.
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this is beautiful!
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Beautiful
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Love comes in many ways and not all of them are meant to tear you apart. But when you end up with such a love…oh, that’s a maddening pain. It takes time to let it fade, to let it sink somewhere in a remote corner of the soul. I don’t think love ever dies; not the unfulfilled ones. They haunt us from time to time, like ghosts escaped from the dungeon.
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True
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Frank, did you ever think about her feelings? About what she want? Did you ever ask her or did you tell her what you tell us in your blog? Do she know about your feelings?
What would be if she read your name in her sky, too? If she would lurking for your eyes on streets and longing for to be close to you? What if she is longing for death to make an end of her pain? What if she can’t live without you? What if she is waiting for you to safe her?
Do you know that or do you feel fear for her answers?
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This poem is not based on me. It is completely fictional. But I admire your view point. Thanks
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In every poem is a piece of truth. But sorry if my words were too “close”. I’m just one of those women…so I know very well how it is on the other side. That’s why my comment.
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No problem at all. Have a nice day, my friend
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Somehow I feel sorry for enjoying the result of your pain… I’m not sure that it’s fine to admire someone’s tears… but I do it
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Oh it’s alright
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Its the price of love and the demise of humanity. In pain there is an unfathomable connection perhaps you enjoy being in touch, realizing your not alone, someones words acknowledeing your own inexpressible, deep groans of again, the fear of accepting our immorality. The comfort, the hope the faith of one fearlessly well.acquainted with grief.
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Wow!
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Thank you
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Thank you. Very touching
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Thanks and welcome
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My writing comes from a similar place, I really enjoy how you articulate yourself in your posts,
Keep up the good work, and whatever happens at least your words will become your digital legacy to such moments in your life.
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Thank you so much
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You should tell her this face to face. Make it straight. Just… a suggestion (: take care blogger, named Frank.
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Sure. Thanks for the suggestion
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Ah Frank, say it isn’t so …
I’ll re-read again later as I know it is the truth, letting go is so hard to do.
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It isn’t so
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U really poured ur heart out.. I loved it… Painful but brilliantly put.
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Thank you so much
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Wow!
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Thank you
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“Some things are never meant to be
A love must die so a life could breathe”
–> heavy words, exactly how I feel right now..
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Oh thanks
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Me too, i’m wondering how many years before i can breathe again. My love should have lived when i was willing to die. How about a heart must beat so the life could breathe and make room for a life of love again. The cost of loving someone the pain must ease. Less i die a wounded heart.
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That’s really awesome
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Thank you
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WOW
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Thank you
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You are welcome x
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Have a nice day, my friend
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This touched my heart. Thank you.
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Welcome
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Loving is dying on my inside… I just can’t understand what love means. Always thought it was pretty straight forward until the day she said “I love you but I don’t really want to be with you. I want to be alone… and I don’t want to hurt you.” She pushes me away while she’s getting busier like she was all the time. :C
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It is difficult to understand. Love is a mystery
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Maybe because I’m a kid in love…
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Everyone’s a kid in love
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I doubt she’s thinking of you at all. Brutal? Insensitive? Yes.
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I wish I could read minds
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“She shut me off as easily as turning off a water faucet. Why do I still think of her?” Actual quote from a actual man after a 25 year marriage ended. Men, it seems, are the sensitive ones after all.
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Yes and quite capable of hiding it too
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Very moving.
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Thank you
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Amazing!
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Thank you
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Beautiful
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Wow
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Thank you
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My exact thought
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indeed
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So true. Thanks for your words Frank.
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Welcome
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