We planned and we planned till we reached the end only to understand that what we had planned was not in our hands
Now we don’t plan anymore
We laughed and we laughed and it seemed enough but we knew in our hearts that it would be tough and destiny caught our bluff
Now we don’t laugh anymore
We played and we disobeyed like our love will never fade but we were afraid to be betrayed by a price too big to be paid
So we don’t play anymore
We talked and walked. We screamed and dreamed. We fought and sought. We had all the fun under the sun
Now we’re strangers like before
great work! enjoyed damn so very much!
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it is something worth admiring sir! :-):-)
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Nicely done. Love the title–and the thought.
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Just amazing so in depth with words and just great
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Gut-wrenchingly beautiful.
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Love it
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so relateable ! LOVE
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love it
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Beautiful
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Wow. Thank you for this.
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its sad but beautiful .
Frank I must tell you frankly, your poetry made wordpress a beautiful place to visit and an inspiration to write . Keep up the good work
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Thank you so much. Too kind of you to say that
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🙂 I mean it
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Oh, how sad!
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I know
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Beautiful and heartbreaking all at once.
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I love this. Very moving.
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Sad but moving
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Woah!! And i like it even more coz i relate to it…
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Really? Thanks
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Yes. Somehow i do.
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Oh I guess life makes us go through all kinds of emotions and situations
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Yes, totally! But sometimes, iit does get way too harsh. And then, we end up cursing.
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True but there’s always a lesson hidden in it
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Yep i completely agree.
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Wonderful Poetry.
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Oh! My! God! You have the rare talent of picturing feelings with words…
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Thanks a lot
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Heartfelt yet powerful words.
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Wonderful lines !
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Me Before You (2016)
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Heart-wrenching and raw, very beautiful!
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I think I came across your blog several years ago but I cannot be sure.
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If it’s before August 2015, then you are mistaken
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i dont think it was that long ago. it may have been about a year ago the title has a nice rhyme to it
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Then it’s definitely me
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Frank, thank you for a strong and deep poem.
It is so sad that all this beauty should end up in them finding that they are now strangers.
Teardrops for them.
miriam
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Thanks for appreciating the poem
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As always a pleasure to read. Full of emotions, but that is you and your words express them so well.
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Oooohh! It has touched meee!!
Beautiful!
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Very clever old chap! Nicely woven 😊
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Beautiful
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This is gold
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Wow. Thank you
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That was really great. I really like your work; it is so from your heart.
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👍
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This is beautiful!
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Love it
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WOW – this one is right-on!
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Powerful words. Thank you for your writing.
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Thank you and welcome
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so beautiful “We played and we disobeyed like our love will never fade”
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That’s so beautifully written! I loved the selection of words and imagination! Perfect piece of writing! 😃😃
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Welcomed! Keep writing and have an amazing weekend! 😉
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Will do. Wish you the same
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I really enjoyed this one. Relatable. Good work.
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This is heart-wrenching and gorgeous. ❤
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Great writing, sad story. I loved it.
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Enjoyed, life is so weird…
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True. Thanks
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Really loved it!
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I hope we never reach a point where we don’t write anymore.
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I hope so too
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Felt like right in the gut. Great writing, as always.
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