Into a river I plunged my soul
Naked and neck-deep
The strong tides made me lose control
And away she did sweep
Into A River I Plunged My Soul – Part 2
Into a river I plunged my soul
Naked and neck-deep
The strong tides made me lose control
And away she did sweep
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Hey, thanks
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🌊
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And???
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She’s still missing
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Oh! My.
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Short but deep! Loved it 🙂 x
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Thanks
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may the river
not be too
deep or cold 🙂
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Hopefully not too sinister either
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yikes, yes make sure
it’s lit with lots
of lights 🙂
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Will do. Thanks
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My kind of verse, clever and succinct!
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Thanks
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So little words, but such a good poem
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Thank you
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Nice poem!
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Thank you
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So much said in such few words…and so beutifully! This my favorite so far.
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Oh thanks
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Not until you let go of control could the river set you free.
It is frightening……….but worth it.
miriam
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True. Thanks
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