Into a river I plunged my soul
Naked and neck-deep
The strong tides made me lose control
And away she did sweep
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Into A River I Plunged My Soul – Part 2
Into a river I plunged my soul
Naked and neck-deep
The strong tides made me lose control
And away she did sweep
Not until you let go of control could the river set you free.
It is frightening……….but worth it.
miriam
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True. Thanks
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So much said in such few words…and so beutifully! This my favorite so far.
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Oh thanks
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Nice poem!
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Thank you
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So little words, but such a good poem
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Thank you
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My kind of verse, clever and succinct!
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Thanks
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may the river
not be too
deep or cold 🙂
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Hopefully not too sinister either
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yikes, yes make sure
it’s lit with lots
of lights 🙂
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Will do. Thanks
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Short but deep! Loved it 🙂 x
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Thanks
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And???
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She’s still missing
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Oh! My.
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🌊
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I have nominated you for liebster award, check it here https://voiceofdil.com/2017/09/24/the-liebster-award-2/
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Hey, thanks
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