You touched my heart and left me
My heart now yearns for eternity
Now my heart will never be the same
Now you tell me just who is to blame?
I, for letting you touch my heart?
You, for coming just to depart?
Of that I don’t know very much
I only know I need your touch

Beautiful poem Anand Bose from Kerala.
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“You, for coming just to depart?” Oh, right to the heart with this line. Lovely, Frank!
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TRUTH to the Core!
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You captured a touching mood. Nicely done.
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Things are geeting changed
May be my heart had loosen its virginity
But i will definitely found a new
That new will change my perspective
How stupid i m thinking only about my heart
He will come n will change my destiny
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Time to discover your inner nihilistic stoic. “The only thing you can truly control are your own thoughts and behavior. But even then, what does it matter, all is futile.” If you set those on opposite sides of a teeter-totter you can toggle them about for years — if not a lifetime.
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A very relatable piece…well done!
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You’re welcome.
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Sometimes, the price of love can be high, but worth it.
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aww I love it!
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The memory of that one touch of the person you like could last a life time as something nostalgic and worth cherishing, but on the flip side could also bring us to great chasms of pain and despair when you yearn to relive that moment again, in vain. Great concept and great poem Frank!
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Thank you, Samir.
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Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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Hi, Frank! It feels so real how ur feeling…😔 hope u can remember that u r not alone.
Anyway, Love is still great love no matter the outcome. I hope to read about the great memories some day? Im sure u r one to be crazy about! 👍🏽
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Thank you so much, Elize. Made my day.
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Glad it did!
For me, a heartbreak makes people special. It essentially is the most intimate we can be with ourselves. It is the only time we truly attend to ourselves, only time become our own bestfriends.☺️
Most of all, it makes us aware of r humanity, a neglected superpower. Hihi. U surely give good love! N with ur humanity, choose the people u gv ur love to wisely bec they surely shall be enriched by ur great human love…☺️
We are never the same after a break up. Make sure u r sweeter and braver at the same time☺️
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Working on it… thanks.
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short but moving love
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Beautiful poem
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Someone should put this to music, Frank.
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La la la…
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How beautifully you have illustrated the pain. Really great.
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Omg. Pain of death and separation. It hurts. It truly does. But it is important to acknowledge it and thus process it in our own ways. Maybe the accolades of your audience continue to spur you onwards towards escaping your own perdition.
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Thanks for that.
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I can relate to this!
Beautiful!
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Beautifully written poem filled with longing for your love.
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beautiful!
my heart, turned off and then turned on again, won’t work anymore..
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Lovely and heartbreaking … I felt it. Thanks.
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Thanks and welcome.
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Poignant 😭
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Every time we open our hearts to be touched by another, you know our vulnerability opens us to pain. But the beauty of the touch lasts – and lessens the pain. And if we’re blessed, we find the touch that never departs. Keep your heart open- or you’ll miss that chance blessing! ❤️
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Sure, Jan.
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Gorgeous! Frank.
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Wow…beautifully written… straight from the heart ❤️! Just lovely…
InHisCare 🙏
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Thank you.
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