Tell me the stars don’t shine
That truth can be confined
That love ain’t divine
And I’ll believe you
But don’t tell me that she is not mine
For I won’t
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Tell me the sun is square
There’s no magic in the air
That God ain’t fair
And I’ll believe you
But don’t tell me that she doesn’t care
For I won’t
…
Tell me the birds aren’t free
Oceans are empty
God has no mercy
And I’ll believe you
But don’t tell me that she isn’t made for me
For I won’t
Tell Me
Frank Solanki 
Awesome lovely work…… Only a true love makes you do that…. Beautiful!
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Reminds me of Tom Waits. In a good way. Somewhere between Martha and Green Grass.
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Thanks for your Like on Love.
Keith.
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Welcome, Keith.
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Simple and powerful!
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This is a well written post.
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Thank you.
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Thanks
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Yes this is true about love and life.
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Indeed.
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Thanks for the poems. I write poetry and I appreciate the artists of the word. Take care and God bless.
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Thanks.
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you are welcome. Good night as well.
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You’re a better poet than Lang Leav. Honestly. You should compile everything and create a book. I love this!
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Thank you. I had to search Lang. She seems to be quite good. So thanks for the compliment.
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So lovely. It’s refreshing when someone actually rhymes and meters something these days…. I could hear this as I read it. I read it to my friend sitting here, just now. It felt like lyrics, or a great slam poetry piece, or monologue.
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Thank you so much.
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you.
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Tons of love and wishes from India..
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Right back at you…
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Thank You So Much😊
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Wow.I just love it 😊
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Thank you.
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As good- if not better- as when I last visited your blog. Lovely!
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Thanks a lot, Vivian.
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🙂
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Beautifully written, Frank!
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Thank you.
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Most welcome.
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Beautifully said.
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Thank you.
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A heartfelt poem. You hit me again!..love it.!
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Thank you. Glad to know you liked it.
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Loved reading this. Beautiful.
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Beautiful and heartfelt love poem. Exquisite rhymes. The repetitions in the last verses of each stanza give the whole poem great strength. Very nice, loved it!
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Unusual twists! Very catchy.
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Thanks.
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I really love this.
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Thanks…
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So beautiful.
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Do you really know who God is and the characteristics of Him? Be careful what you write now, he’s watching. 🙂
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Oops…
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You are a gifted poet…love the way u write…..
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Thank you.
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Love it when you turn to love 🙂 x
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Well, this time the heart grabbed the pen.
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really like this
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Beautiful expression to inner sentiment.
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This is like a song. 😀
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Thank you.
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Your rhymes are so perfect! Like the words are made for each other when you put them together 😀
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That is so good to hear. Thank you.
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Wow! Just so so romantic 🙂
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Beautiful !
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That trust level is amazing. No, scratch that, it’s not trust but rather knowing the truth of what the other feels. Amazing.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome. ❤️
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Have a nice day!
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Same to you. ❤
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This is wonderful. Reblogging to sister site “Timeless Wisdoms”
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Love, ah love. Great one!
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A story of hope, love and defiance with belief in reliance, how can you not like it, good job Frank I enjoyed it.
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Wow!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come enjoy Franks’ – TELL ME”
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An antithesis to Donne’s ‘Go and Catch a Falling Star’. True love, indeed.
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Sounds like true love, here.
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Thanks, Marie.
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You know, this is really beautiful
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Thank you.
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Excellent….Very beautiful..Loved it..
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on MOE and commented:
Love!🖒💔❤
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It’s true love!
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Ah, thanks.
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Sounds like a true love. I thought that was amazing writing.
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Thank you, Reggie.
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You’re welcome. I enjoy your work, and there’s so much more to read!
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Thanks again. And have a nice day.
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You as well.
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Reblogged this on Everyday Operations in Inspirational Living.
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