Mirrors are broken
Rules are broken
Promises are broken
So am I
Hearts are broken
So am I
…
Wallet is lost
Memory is lost
Family is lost
So am I
Mind is lost
So am I
…
Babies are crying
Shame is crying
Needs are crying
So am I
Clouds are crying
So am I
…
Body is weak
Resistance is weak
Faith is weak
So am I
Men are weak
So am I
…
Glass is empty
House is empty
Soul is empty
So am I
Thoughts are empty
So am I
…
Battery is dead
Ideas are dead
Chester is dead
I will be too
Hopes are dead
I will be too
So Am I
Frank Solanki 
This is really cleverly written. I loved reading this:)
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Thank you
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I love it. 👍🏼
I’m Kitti.
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Nice to meet you
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Nice to meet you too.
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Looking forward to hearing from you again
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Absolutely✌🏻
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So am I ( the same feelings)
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You write so good
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Thank you
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beautifully described the day to day life. I’m out of words after reading this. The words, they speak loud and clear.. amazing simply amazing
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Thank you so much
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I just can’t 🙅🏽 your writing is just too amazing 🔥👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽🔥
Speaks to my soul
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Thank you
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And so am I too😶
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Oh no. My poem is fictional. You are as true as life
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😀😀
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This poem made me think about a lot
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I am glad to hear that
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You said, “Not until I’ve written a billion more poems”. Best wishes to your endeavor, Frank!
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Thank you so much
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I am a prosaic type and poetry rarely speaks to me. When it does, I’m not sure I hear what I’m supposed to hear. I console myself by thinking that the power of poetry allegedly lies in its ability to invite various interpretations. What I just read gave me goosebumps! The staccato pace makes it as powerful as a hammer blow and the desolation that pours from it is gut-wrenching. Of course, I could be reading it all wrong. Anyway, I’m awed!
Oh, and I came here to thank you for reading one of my posts and giving it your stamp of approval. It’s highly appreciated. Stay creative and make it to that 1 billion mark 🙂
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Haha. I will. Thanks. You keep up the good work too
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Outstanding!
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Thank you
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Wonderfully penned, Frank. Stick around, okay!
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I will. Thank you
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A great poem.
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Thank you
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This is really awesome!
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Thank you
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Well said. So am I.
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Thank you
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I really like this I can relate my my soul is very tired
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I just want to say. ..such pessimism. … 😦 it makes me all hopeless. .. 😦
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There are all sorts of people in this world
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I love this
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Well done, but disturbing. Hang in there, man. Look for the good things in life.
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Will do. Thank you
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I am struggling with some depression and anxiety issues myself due to the mess of a government we have now. I spend time on WordPress to find the good in humanity again. Your poetry is moving. Thanks for sharing. And remember, you are important. Think of how much we all enjoy your work.
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Thank you for your words. Keep the faith. I am sure things will get better. Good luck and take care
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You too Frank. 👍
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Yeah 😦
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This was brilliant! Really enjoyed reading it. Those beats/rhythms just worked for me.
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Thank you
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Well written Frank..Deep and meaningful, life conveyed in a few sentences 👍
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Thank you
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i hate the third last line!
Will wait for more!
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I hate that line too
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😅
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Amazing poem… true poetry!
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Thank you
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While you’re writing
so am I
Others are commenting
So am I
People are praising you
So Am I 🙂
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Haha. This is cool. Thank you
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Frank, your poem reflects true poetry – your soul within your heart. You are life and with life is hope and with that hope you present the soul of your heart. Thank you.
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Thank you for your words. Most appreciated
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So in love with your writing style, you are crazy-talented.
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Thank you so much
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Having just learned that best friend has been diagnosed with pancreatic cancer, this one hits home. Thanks for articulating the feeling.
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Prayers for him. Take care
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Very deep poem
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Thanks
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No problem
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Amazing poem ! So meaningful 🙂
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Thank you
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So is everybody from inside … but the beauty is, still life gives us so many reasons to smile .. well written poem.
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True. Thank you
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Oh Frank! Amazing … Oh I love the style, arrangement, stimulation of senses … Really Great
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Thank you
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Masterful writing…!
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Thank you
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Do not die on us, Frank! What would we ever do without your words!
Beautiful poem once again 😊
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Too kind. Thank you
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that’s good to know!
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“Chester is dead”… don’t you be.
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Not until I’ve written a billion more poems
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Okay, good.
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Have a nice day, my friend
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You too, friend.
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One billion shall not be enough!
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How many do you think will be then?
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Deep.
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Thanks
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Wow Frank, your words blow me away. Beautiful mind … so sad …
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Thank you
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Nicely written
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Thank you
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I feel that way every day…and still I scream at life, bring it!
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So do I. Haha
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