I keep walking this endless street
There is no one I do meet
In my head are a thousand thoughts
Fastened together with rough knots
A dim light I see afar
Guided by a lonely star
Save me from my own self
I am really of no help
Peaceful homes where people sleep
Pass me by as I weep
Alone I feel so incomplete
I keep walking this endless street
I am getting out of breath
Sometimes I feel that sudden death
Is better than pain and suffering
Better than I feel everything
So test my knees and test my heart
Until my weakened soul departs
Away to a distant foreign land
Where there’s nothing to understand
My empty heart just skipped a beat
I keep walking this endless street
Pick my sorrows and lay them down
Cover the streets of this endless town
I’d speak the truth if there was an ear
I’d tell my dreams if you were near
The birds they sing a desolate song
This is not where I belong
You think I’m happy, I am strong
I am weak and you are wrong
So I accept my defeat
I keep walking this endless street

Very is sad… But heart touching..! Keep up the good work buddy!
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Thank you.
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*this is very sad
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Sad, but amazing words!
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that hurts 😦 ❤
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I know
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This poem shows you have the soul of a poet and that you can turn a nice phrase when you set yourself to the task. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you
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Love this…its sooooo deeep
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Thank you
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I love this!
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Thanks
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“This is not where I belong You think I’m happy, I am strong I am weak and you are wrong So I accept my defeat I keep walking this endless street”
So much feel for those line. Thumbs up! 👍🏼
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Thank you
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This really resonates with me. You have an amazing way with words
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The comment section is lit. I hope i could do poetry like you or people in the comment section. But I write raps though😜
I fall, get up , do my best
have head ache, heartache , bulletproof vest
All the haters are gonna hate, kelz
Always live the moment, leave the rest
Your poem is beautiful 🙂
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Thank you. Love the mini rap
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Hey thanks :). Your comment means a lot to me ☺️
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https://richitaroy.wordpress.com/2017/01/30/the-rap-riff-off/ Here’s a blog about a rap riff off with my twin sister😃. Hope you enjoy it:). Have an awesome day.
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You too. Take care
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Lovely walk endlessly
Thoughts and feelings
Move along
Maybe not a happy song
Things are mostly wrong
Still one must walk till end
With fear or anxiety at bends
Heart and soul will leave
Some one else will walk with me
Death a promise
A console
Will I die young or old
Does it matter
If I was told
Live life..there is not much to hold
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Well layed out !!
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Thank you
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You poetry inspires me. I actually took the time to recite this one. Thanks for sharing!
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I am so happy to hear that
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I just looooooooooooooooooove your work. Your poetry is always so beautiful every single time. God bless
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Thank you so much
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you
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Your welcome
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Have a nice day, my friend
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Thanks and same to you!
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Your poetry is always so beautiful. But I hope your life is happier than your poetry. Love ya!
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Thank you. Love you too
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Words with a synonymous beat
Is your message this endless street
Anonymous love is sent with respect
From one who relates and whom this effects.
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This is so cool from you
I wish I could do that too
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There are none so strong as those who admit to feeling weak.
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So true
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It’s like it was written for me. Oh my heart. It’s sad and comforting at the same time.
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I am happy that you can relate to it. Nice to meet you. Thanks for your comment
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Nice to meet you too! Will read more soon.
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Hopefully you will like them too
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Wow
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Made me think of how I’ve been walking 🙂 But it doesn’t get lonely, I walk at sunset, and the sky isn’t dark yet, and I see the clouds smiling at me, and know that God loves me ❤️ Take care blogger Frank. But I dont think you should ever stop smiling 🙂
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I went to Egypt recently, the people there were mean to me. And they had somehow made me stop smiling. And that is something that God did not want for me. That was why I had to leave.
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It made me think how much pain I’ve been in. And more. Since my ex left. I really did not like it. In Egypt.
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Will remember that
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Liked this poem a lot. It’s true that its only alone that I can finally relax and be free to show my weakness, not to anyone but myself.
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Thanks
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Great piece Frank.
Is this a personal journey? and if so, know who you are in Christ and that He is your everything!
Be blessed!
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Thanks. This is a fictional piece. Take care
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You to Frank. Looking forward to reading more of your work. God bless.
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Lovely read.👍
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Thank you
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I really enjoyed this one. Something about the meter here really hit the spot with me today. Well done.
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a ten my friend
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It really is amazing what you are able to convey with such few words. I love this.
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A somber poem, but there’s happiness behind the realizations within. I’ve felt this way all week long, but I realized that I just need to take the next left for a new opportunity.
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So glad to hear that. Good luck
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