You Came In Like A Thunderstorm

You came in like a thunderstorm

You left like a gentle breeze

The void you created in my heart

Can now be never filled

Published by Frank Solanki

Making the world a better place one poem at a time. View all posts by Frank Solanki

cestlavie24 says:

June 5, 2019 at 9:50 am

this was genuinely nice

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1. Frank Solanki says:
  
  June 5, 2019 at 2:53 pm
  
  Thanks.
  
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thatgirliscallista says:

March 9, 2019 at 2:24 am

Oh I was moved. I felt your pain sir. Get well soon your heart.

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1. Frank Solanki says:
  
  March 9, 2019 at 7:33 am
  
  Thanks.
  
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pick1solution says:

March 7, 2019 at 1:07 am

Nice way to put it. I have to agree.

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a.mermaid'spen_ says:

March 6, 2019 at 10:28 am

Heart – shattering!

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The Purging Lutheran says:

March 6, 2019 at 10:25 am

Your heart has four chambers. Give each a chance.

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davidguerrieriwrites says:

March 6, 2019 at 8:38 am

Duct tape fixes most things, not these though. Be well.

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1. Frank Solanki says:
  
  March 6, 2019 at 10:38 am
  
  Thanks.
  
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Kalliope says:

March 6, 2019 at 4:01 am

No way, you don’t say, just now this day, I was just playing Charlie. Playing on guitar that Jolene cover, I was also singing.
I came in like a kool aid man, and destroyed another wall again, I hope you’ve got insurance, all I ever did was wreck you, yeah I wrecked Ralph.

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