Off I went to cut a tree
For I was in need of wood
So I grabbed the sharpest axe
To chop the best I could
In a forest of hundred trees
I picked the strongest one
Just a few hours of trying labour
And my job be done
As I was about to strike
The first and fierce blow
The marked tree turned and looked at me
Warmly greeted me “Hello”
I pinched myself just to see
If I was dreaming in daylight
When the giant tree spoke to me
“Who did give you the right
To chop and cut as you please
With very little care
About the lives of our tribe
Like we’re a piece of spare?”
“I’m sorry if you think that way”
Quick came my reply
“I never knew that even trees do
Feel pain, hurt and cry
A few branches is all I need
What harm can it do to you?”
“In that case,” the tree replied
“Forfeit a finger or two”
Leaning forward the mighty tree
Tried to grab my hand
I dropped my axe and off I ran
Lest he’d have me panned
While I ran, I saw and found
The forest staring at me
With a shudder I made a vow
Never again to cut a tree

Run I would… Well written.
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The poem is simply clean and clear speak and impactful! Should be made part of the curriculum for middle school, but not primary as you may have a hoard of shuddering, yelling young ones desperately running away from the trees… 😁
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I sure hope they put it in the curriculum.
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Amazing poem. Quite an eco-warrior you are. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Thanks, Anand.
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You made ecology into a spirituality. Anand Bose from Kerala
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So wonderfully written! I wish trees could actually react like this… We then wouldn’t have the environmental challenges we’re facing today.
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Poor trees, how many we killed without mourning them. Once the city council decided to cut big trees on the street. The sight of all of them lying down before our eyes to see made me sad and traumatized. I was a bit relieved when a taxi driver an old man shared my empathy for trees and said it was sad as well to see them down … human hearts still feel for trees
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This must come from the environmentalist in you. Loved reading it. I have planted several trees and taught others too to do so as a sacred act hence this is close to heart.
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Thanks. Great work with the trees.
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Loved it! Reminded me of Treebeard the Ent in Lord Of The Rings.
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Very nicely put.
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Thank you.
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Creator’s teeth, I love your poetry. This one just made me snort. That tree definitely knows how to scare people off.
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beautiful 😊
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Thank you.
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Those are some fine drugs you’re taking. Care to share?
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It might happen…
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Wow! It is such a powerful message to all of us for respecting All that is life! Thank you for sharing such a great poem! I have just shared it, too! 🙂
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Thanks a lot.
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You are more than welcome!
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Such deep messages in great imaginations. Lovely!
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Thank you.
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LOL. This was amazing. Loved it.
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Lovely and insightful poem! It reminds me of the song “A Day in the Life of a Tree” by The Beach Boys (which is a sad song btw)
I really love your poems. They have a way of touching the soul.
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Thank you. I’ll listen to that song sometime.
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Thank you for this write! All of creation cries out at our atrocities. So wonderful that you heard it in your heart and shared it so very, very beautifully. Thank YOU on behalf of the tree and forest. 🙂 Lots of trees are being cut near where i live to make way for a metro. It is sooooo heartbreaking. 😦
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I know. Really heartbreaking. Thanks for the appreciation.
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Here is a poem on that — maybe you will connect – thank you.
https://krishnapriyagopi.wordpress.com/2018/07/18/my-heart-bleeds/
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Another excellent poem, Frank. Reading your work always makes me smile. Thank you.
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You are most welcome, Tim. I am happy if I could someone happy with my work.
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😊
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Very good rhythm in the poem. Love the story, I feel like it can be applied to so many things in life.
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Np! ^^
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Great poem, sir. Here’s another about a tree…..
https://secret-lifeof.com/2018/11/20/the-tree-hugger/
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I loved the imagery and the imagination of a tree talking to you. Our Lion’s Club cuts trees from a designated part of our forest that needs to be culled to make room for more sunlight and growth as smaller trees grow. I buy my tree each year from the Lion’s Club lot, a fund raiser for them, a gift to the forest, and a delight for us. I love the smell of pine!
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That’s nice. Thanks for liking the poem.
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No need to be rude. If you are writing tongue in cheek, take it out and position yourself in a more positive light. No need to be rude!
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Great post. Perfect time of year for it. Maybe I’ll read it to my grandkids to scare them, lol. Jk, they have an artificial tree.
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Ha-ha. Let me know how the narration goes.
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I enjoy the imaginativeness of this very much.
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Thanks.
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Loved it!!
Georgina |https://georginawangui.com
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Thank you.
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A wonderful way to send the message people seem to ignore! Thanks for a lovely poem.
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Thank you and welcome.
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Good one!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful! 😊
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Thank you.
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I love this! 😂
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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Have a wonderful Sunday!
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Will do!
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Amazing story Frank. I guess the axe will go to a retirement home now.
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Already registered there.
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Great poem. Everything that has a life should be respected. Who are we to decide who lives and who dies especially in Nature.
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True. Thanks.
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👏🏼🌲🙌🏼❣️EXCELLENT, Frank ~ Very well done❣️ And I was just viewing a painting the other day of a silhouetted woodsman with an ax, chasing a terrified and screaming tree through the forest…Last year I actually burst into tears, passing by a X-mas Tree lot…🌲💝🌲…Bravo.
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Wow. Thanks.
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HAAHAHA Holy crap. That is golden. Nice to see someone else has a completely NOT NORMAL response to trees, too.
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Ha-ha. Thanks.
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