The kids with whom I went to school
Are all grown up and settled now
They’re all rich and fancy cool
But I can’t find a job somehow
…
They’ve got pretty houses with pretty families
They spend their days working earning tons of monies
So busy that they have no time to meet me
My cat and my poems make up my family
I never made it big in life so they think I’m a fool
All the darned kids with whom I went to school
…
But I’ve also heard that they’re too busy
To spend some time with their families
They barely get any time to even catch some sleep
So they lie awake at night. I know they quietly weep
They wear those tight masks and speak those white lies
Their hair are all grey and they’ve got baggy eyes
Their lives are full of stress and immense mental strain
They couldn’t even enjoy a single moment of rain
…
Sometimes I really wonder who’s the real fool
The kids with whom I went to school
They’re all rich and fancy cool
They’re all grown up and settled down
But I’m the one with the golden crown

Great work! I share the same thoughts- money isnβt everything. School reunions can be shallow and focus on who has done what. Far better to still know who you are and not be some shallow version of who you used to be.
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Wow. That’s some really amazing writing. Like seriously, not that many people can write and leave an impact on their reader. Loved it. P.S. You wear that crown with pride!!
https://theworldtoldbyanamericanyouth.home.blog/ (my blog) π
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Thanks a lot.
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For where your heart is, there will your treasure be.
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Simply lovely π
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Thank you.
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ππ»π
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I think the kids with whom I went to school are doing just fine, and I’m fine with that.
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That’s just great!
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Beautiful post, Frank!!
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Thank you, Georgina.
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This was so beautiful. Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Our time clock is different in life. We all have to wait for our time to make it.
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Having lived both sides of this poem – being crazy busy trying to earn enough to make me and my family “happy” and missing out on the little things. I now get to enjoy the little things. Taking time to watch the snow fall, enjoying the beauty. My cat kinda likes this new, happier me as we get more couch time. π So yes, wear the golden crown and enjoy the peace!
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So glad to hear your story.
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Wonderful write! I love your golden crown. π
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Thank you.
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Frank, this is brilliantly written and highlighting a very often sad situation.
Many pay an impossible price for this life of luxury and fake masks. Those who pursued what
was their passion might just accept extra money as a side issue, not working just for.
To have no time for living, no time to see a rainbow, no time to feel the softness of summer rain …
that is poverty to me.
Would it that we could balance work and just living.
Miriam
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Thanks Miriam for the insights and your thoughts on it.
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The road less travelled Frank! Love it!
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Thanks.
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Beautiful ππΉ
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Thank you.
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Happiness is the ultimate!
ππ
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Indeed!
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Wow! This is one amazing piece! Absolutely loved it.
This is something I think of all the people speaking white lies. Who’s the one with the golden crown? π
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Thanks.
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DEEP AND INSIGHTFUL. Speaks truth. Keep it up, man!
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Thank you.
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Hail to the king with the crown.
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All bow
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Money makes the base things easier. The higher endeavors, happiness, love, fulfillment, come from one’s own struggles and inner vision. Money often confounds such pursuits. But, I wish we could all exist with an equal baseline of economic status. Then we could all be equally measured — and be acknowledge for the real, foundational aspects of life.
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Got it.
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Just my opinion. I wish I were rich.
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Sounds so familiar! Oh you are wearing the crown my friend!
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If it sounds familiar then you have the crown too
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Me too
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That’s a life well spent
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β€
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome π
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Love it!
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Thank you.
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