Oh I seek you insanely all day
Without you I lay blank here
You never seem to come my way
As soon you come you disappear
When I lay down to fall asleep
You come out then to say hello
Since I saved no space to keep
You I suspend till ‘morrow
When I wake with the morning light
You are gone with no single trail
No memory of your sound or sight
Not even of your head or tail
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I mean not even a trace can be seen in the a.m. Very good.
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So familiar and right on the money. My best ideas come many times just as I am about to nod off. So you either write them down that instant, which is unlikely, or you will never find trace of them the next day.
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And that is so frustrating, isn’t it?
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I have had some ideas that pop into my head at awkward times, and by the time I think to write them down- poof! It may have been brilliant, or at least it might have been. LOL.
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I know that feeling all too well.
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Same here
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The difference a title makes – I hadn’t noticed the title and read this as of a woman – now that idea won’t go! There’s no accounting for the things that happen when our words get into the minds of readers.
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I wrote it as if the narrator was talking to some pest. Woman. Pest. How are they different, anyway? Ha-ha.
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Different minds again!
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Deep words
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π
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I know exactly what you mean!
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this happens to me in dreams..sometimes i get great ideas through dream but i couldn’t write it of course in dream but i am so much self aware in my dreams sometimes that i used to make myself repeat that idea in dream and till the time i wake up from that dream..it’s gone..i couldn’t remember anything..once i dreamed about writing 1 line in a poems and i made myself repeat it again and again in dream to remember it..and i was able to remember it after i woke up and even i used this line in my poem and this line is “If you are obscuring same from mine”
you can find this line in my poem titled “DARKLING SKY” π π
https://extremesofunknownshadows.wordpress.com/2016/08/14/darkling-sky/
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Nice one.
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So different and unique too!
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Oh so true. I love your writings.
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Thank you.
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And here I thought you were referring to a free-spirited woman! :O
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No, no, no.
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π LOL
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That’s a great one Frank, and so true for so many of us. π
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Thank you, Tim.
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You are welcome, Frank. Always a pleasure to read your poems. Thank you and happy blogging.
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Love this! Accurate and relatable ππ»
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Thanks.
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