We came and we saw
That we had a flaw
Yet our hearts beat in the same way
I killed your fears
You wiped my tears
Yet there’s a God that keeps us away
Now we’re smiling and this is real
Your smile could halt the passing of day
Still there are doubts that we could feel
Years from now someone would say
The other door was open but still
We walked the path that didn’t betray
Your life or mine
It’ll all seem fine
Except that it could have been the light
We wanted to hold
But as we were told
Even the brightest day leads to a night
The little pain will grow tomorrow
Reminding us all over again
We walked the path with lesser sorrow
Yet we wish that it would rain
And offer us another chance to borrow
Our love that we let go in vain

Pleasure is all mine
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Sometimes, one chose an easy and convenient path to make others happy but the regret it holds, is realised later….
Stupendous poem
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Thank you, Heena.
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Nice piece!
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Thank you.
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I really like this Frank !
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Thank you.
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Loved it❤Even the brightest day leads to a night👌👌
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Thank you.
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watta beauty!
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Thanks, Himanshu.
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Passionately sad!
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“Even the brightest day leads to a night.” I love that line. Awesome!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful story. Thanks.
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Welcome.
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You just keep getting better and better and growing more and more as a beautiful love poet 🙂 Well done! Simply amazing and worded so beautifully 🙂 x
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Thank you, Deborah.
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‘We walked the path with lesser sorrow
Yet we wish that it would rain
….Our love that we let go in vain”
I can paint myself in these words of yours ☺. I loved reading it.
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Thanks.
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Sadly beautiful. Well done Frank.
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Thank you, Walt.
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Simply beautiful!
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Thank you.
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Excellent piece of work, very heartfelt!😊
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Thank you, Tamara.
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You’re most welcome Frank!
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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so sweet yet heartbreaking… beautiful.
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Thank you.
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Aww, this is so beautiful and poignant. How often we take the path which is safe and don’t reach out for love which is an adventure.
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True. Thanks, Megha.
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My pleasure Frank
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