Our love was never eternal
‘Twas a passion of youth
Though it wasn’t based on lies
It never was founded on truth
Our love was never so strong
To resist the force of time
Merely an object to fondle with
In instances of our prime
Now that our love’s departed
We truly don’t pine too much
Never long for your presence
Never yearn for your touch
Our Love Was Never Eternal
Frank Solanki 
Your stories and poems are very beautiful
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Yw
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so beautiful
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Love your poems. It truly stikes at the heart and I can relate to them. Its as if I’m stepping in broken glass along the way and the only way to get through it is to take it one step at a time.
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Beautifully written as always, Frank. Last April I wrote a spring poem which I think complements yours in the initial stage of a relationship: https://momentsbloc.wordpress.com/2017/04/09/i-tasted-spring/
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I read it. Quite nice really.
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Good work
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Nice one Frank! So simply put; yet with such strong emotion!
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Beautifully written poem and so sensitive to the truth of growth.
I know some 16 and 17 year olds now, their love is so intense and they believe it will last forever.
They are true to themselves and each other but they still have a lot of growing. Beautiful to watch
……..and you remember it so well.
Little do we know
miriam
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Scars are hard to forget.
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I wish the same to you too. 😇
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Absolutely fantastic! 🙌🏻
Frank, from my own experience- I realised it’s a great – great feeling to have moved on , to feel that you are actually stronger than before and are better off without the person who left you in the middle of the road – heartbroken.
If they can love you for who you are, then good. If they can’t – then they are simply not deserving of your love.
That’s one simple fact which took me months to understand.
As a coincidence – today exactly being 7 months – she left me, I am getting to read such a beautiful thought provoking poem of yours! Cheers buddy.
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Glad to hear about your experience. May you continue to grow stronger. Have a nice day.
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I can relate to this…
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That’s good enough for me.
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Nice job, Frank. I love this one.
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Your best yet as far as i am concerned! 🙂 x
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It feels so good to hear that. I know you have been a regular reader of my works, and to hear it from you means a lot to me. Thank you, Deborah.
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Your poem’s like a shard of glass that went directly for my heart. Very well-written. Thanks for the feels. :’)
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Wow. That was a very intense response. Thank you.
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Sorry about that.. Have a great day ~
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You too.
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so true…. so you move on!
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Yep………
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Oh..this is heart crushing or else the harsh truth
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May be a bit of both
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Yes I think so too.
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