I left the window open
And off I went to sleep
My mind was still quite active
In a slumber all too deep
And in my dreams I saw
All creatures, big and small
Entering through my window
Some I can’t recall
I saw a genie and a frog
Who claimed to be my wife
I thought I saw God and
Death came to take my life
I partied with a monster
I flirted with a thought
Saw day turn into night time
Enjoying myself a lot
That was as much as I
Can recollect and remember
It was like me sleeping
From January to December
When I woke up in the morning
The window was well shut
The creatures were all waiting
It was a dream but…

Thanks for contacting me! Love this!
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Thanks and welcome.
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Such great imagination!! Really brought me somewhere else. Remember to leave that window shut!!!!
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Will do. Thanks.
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You are welcome.
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I love all the “I left the window open” poem series. Well, to be honest, I am fond of all your poems because they sound very musical, have a great choice of words and are incredibly accessible. You are a great communicator, which is not always the case with many poets that tend to be rather obtuse. I think you know very well how to reach a broad readership with your diaphanous style, dealing with universal topics such as love with its highs and lows. Also, the oniric elements make our imaginations fly.
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Thank you for the compliments.
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Perfect poem!
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Thank you.
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I’ve been meaning to ask you what kind of window do you have?
Do you love to leave it open just for the company? 😉
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Nothing special. Just open.
I love the company of solitude more than anything.
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beautifully said
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Thanks.
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“I thought I saw God…” is a great prompt. I think I’ll use it! This is a fun poem. Do consider submitting to the anthology I am curating, poems for peace (forthcoming fall 2018). Submit here: https://moonshadowsanctuarypress.submittable.com/submit/108450/poems-for-peace-anthology
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🙂
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Hi Frank, Thanks for liking my post. I enjoyed reading your poetry, especially as I too have the zaniest dreams…Very imaginative. Cheers!
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Thank you.
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This is a really amazing series 😃
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Thank you.
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Wow this is amazing! Great ideas 🙂
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Thank you
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Beautiful. Love it
Miaow
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Thank you.
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I have been thinking what’s next . . .
But Your wife was fuming
The electric metric was humming
You sat on your butt
And asked ‘What’s cooking?”
She said,”Nothing!”
Happy Easter Frank!
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Happy Easter to you too.
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Wow what an amazing poems – I love it!
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Thank you.
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The sleep of reason creates monsters.
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So true.
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Please keep the window open.
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May be some other time, some other day.
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Just loved the your journey through your dream. Should I say, may your dream come true 😊
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Well at least I’d be prepared.
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Witty answer 😊
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Thanks.
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This makes me want to dream
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Dream on till your dreams come true.
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I will 🙂
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Excellent imaginative piece. You’re very creative with words.
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Thank you.
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Nicely penned..
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Reblogged this on brenderomariwritings.
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Oh wow, so fascinating!! 😄
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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Wonderful work!
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Thank you.
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A dream but….but what? Lol
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Even I am confused.
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Lolol haha! You’re too good that’s the problem! 😅
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That is one problem I enjoy having.
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Hahaha! I see!
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Just great you know! Salute to your imagination! Just awessoomee 😉🎉✨
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Thank you.
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Well done brother.
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Thank you.
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I love it!
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Thanks.
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Though an open window
I can hear a standing ovation.
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Thank you. Now I could too.
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Hear, hear!
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Nice play with words! 🙂
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Thank you.
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I love you imagination….you have a special art in imagery…enjoyed every bit of it!
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Thank you, Annadine.
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You are most welcome Frank…
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