When darkness and silence reined my day
I needed a little calm to come my way
To desolation I bid adieu
I so needed a girl like you
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Loneliness and sadness had become my friends
Depressing thoughts in my head had no ends
You turned the grey skies to blue
How I wanted a girl like you
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My empty heart had a giant hole
That spread across and destroyed my soul
You filled the void anew
I always wished for a girl like you
…
The sands of time fell off from my hand
My isolate fate lay in a faraway land
An angel’s touch was overdue
How I longed for a girl like you
…
You brought my life back on track
Changed it to bright white from dark black
Now that I’ve got you
I’d like another girl like you
A Girl Like You
Frank Solanki 
I love this one.
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Awwww….this is so sweet, but you’ll never find a girl like me lol 😂😅😅😂😂 I’m just joking!!! I’m very humorous! Good poem! I love it!
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Haha. Thank you. I am sure you are quite unique and special. And humourous too.
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😅….Awww yes I am indeed! Thank you for the sweet compliment! 😊
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Oh, and you’re welcome! How could I forget to say that! Aha! #sillyme 😳
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It would seem as though somebody is in love. Good for you! And also thank you for stopping by to read my recent post, Elusive Success. It meant a lot to me!
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Thanks and welcome
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I just love the way you write! Sx 🙂
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I love your work, you inspire me Thank you for sharing x
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Thank you and welcome
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This is beautiful
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Haha!
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I really like it how you can make us feel things even when that didn’t happened to us.
great post!
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Thank you, Himanshu
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Fun ending! It shook me up and made me think. Thank you.
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Thanks and welcome
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No problem I only speak the truth and thx again for stopping by xxx
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Heyy I have only read this post of yours since it’s the most recent but it’s absolutely amazing! It’s filled with love romance and passion and you describe it so well with the use of words. I admire that!
Also thx for checking out my blog. It’s small but something nevertheless. Hopefully you could connect to my content and liked it. I have been trying to make it more personal and open and honest so encourage everyone to just be themselves. Basically a platform where no one will get judged and you can voice your opinions. I am glad you stumbled across it.
If you have any feedback for me please don’t hesitate to tell me or get in contact.
Love,
Giralert Xxx
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Thank you, Giralert
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Great post!
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Omg.. This was amazing
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How old are you?
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24
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What a journey each line took me deeper and deeper into your mind.
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I’m glad to hear that
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This was amazing. I also write lyrics/poems, maybe one day I’ll release them on my blog website.
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Please do and let me know
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We want a poet like you!!! 👌👌
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Wow. Thanks for that
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My pleasure🤗🤗
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The sands of time fell off from my hand
My isolate fate lay in a faraway land
An angel’s touch was overdue
How I longed for a girl like you
Wow! Frank! You are just growing and growing with all of this love 🙂 x Well done! Just truly beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Deborah
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What a surprising ending Frank! Great poem..
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I actually read this one and the last one as if the girl is actually a baby girl…however I did just recently have a baby girl so perhaps my perception is biased lol
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It’s how you like to read it. Congratulations, by the way!
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The last two lines are predestined to let rinse out many of her diamonds. Better she don’t read, I guess.
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Awwww – loved the romance throughout and enjoyed your twist 😊 great post
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Greedy, greedy. Sardonic little ending.
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Haha
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Your poems are my inspiration❤
Loved it!
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Thank you
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Reminded me how I felt after the death of my first wife…
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Oh! I love this! It’s wonderful!!
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Thank you
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I knew something had to be coming at the end!! Fantastic writing as always, Frank!! Amazing poem!!
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Thank you, Ana
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Omg..really..I was reading this poem filled with the feeling of love and solitude and then you ended it like this. What a twist. You are really good at this, Frank.
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Thank you, Megha
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