If you hold me
Like you used to
Then these thorns and rain will go away
Hear my story
Like you used to
When the night has taken out the day
With the rain falling outside
I’m trapped in my own home
Trying to escape the thoughts
Only brings me closer to them
I’m worried
I’m uneasy
As I watch the flowers wilt for want of air
If you hold me
Like you used to
Then these thorns and rain will go away
Hear my story
Like you used to
When the night has taken out the day
My eyes witness melancholy
My soul shoulders the blame
All I have is the distance
Where one day a bridge shall stand
I’m thinking
I’m hungry
My body will take no other nourishment
If you hold me
Like you used to
Then these thorns and rain will go away
Hear my story
Like you used to
When the night has taken out the day
Like You Used To

Awesome words,so nicely expressed, you know how to play with words.👌
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Thank you so much! 😁
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BEAUTIFUL! Thank you.
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Welcome, Jackie 😇🖐
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Wow its amazing
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Thank you, Habib! 😇
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I really like the message here! Excellent…… Excellent work!
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Thank you so much!
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You have a very special gift with words 👏
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Thank you, my friend!
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Excellent writing, a very nice poem👍
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Thank you, Pramod
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You are welcome
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Beautiful
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Thank you, my friend
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This is wonderful, Frank!
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Thank you so much, Tara. 💗
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you, Dawn! 💗
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Not in a million years, but I loved how you connected three distinct beads with one thread
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I love ‘when the night has taken out the day’ particularly. Reminds me of taking out the trash cans. Also dating. Also killing. Such a simple yet productive metaphor
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That escalated quickly 😁
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Lol. Did you foresee all those?
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Oh man, the sorrow and ache are powerful in this poem.
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Thank you, Dave!
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Nice one:))
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Thank you 😇
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I can feel the pain… 😦
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💔
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Sincerest condolences, Alexander. Writing is a good way to help deal with grief. Hang in there.
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I sure will, Elizabeth! Thank you 😇
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such a poignant word… if… painful too…
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💗
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Frank, that was great. Lovely emotions.
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Thank you, my friend 😇
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Strong and powerful words.
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Thanks a lot, Paula 🌟🌟
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Lovely writing Frank. A longing heart. “Trying to escape the thoughts
Only brings me closer to them”… So true..so devastatingly true. 🙏
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Thank you, Nigel! 🙏
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Very beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much 😇
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