Pale skin Dead hands Crooked back No breath Open mouth Eyes closed Bald scalp Cold jaw Bruised palms Bruised heart Dark skin Stiff jaw Short height Short life Wounded finger Doesn’t matter Beautiful soul Gone home
As my mother lay dying last Saturday, I thought of her “open mouth” as she took her last breaths. Her life, though, was 95 years long. Beautiful piece.
Very haunting. I love it
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This carries such a strong impact. Beautifully composed.
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Brilliantly written 🖤🖤
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Love this
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Strong and poignant!
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As my mother lay dying last Saturday, I thought of her “open mouth” as she took her last breaths. Her life, though, was 95 years long. Beautiful piece.
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Strong piece!
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