Once I ate some spiders
Just to check their taste
My tongue felt nothing. An
Experiment in waste
They went down in one gulp
I thought it was the end
But I was proved so wrong
By my abdomen
I can feel them crawling
Weaving webs inside
Just no way to stop them
Nowhere to run or hide
I can’t take it anymore
The pain is terrible
Don’t know what they’re doing
But it’s unbearable
Now there’s only one thing
That I need to do
I’ll cut myself wide open
You can have them too

Hi.
So I read a few of your posts today. I wish I could leave a feedback for all of them. This one made me nostalgic about a really happy time of consuming great writings of similar style. I thank you for making me relive those moments. Please keep writing!
I also want to thank you for visiting my blog. If you find my writings intriguing you are welcomed there to read, critique and follow – https://svayamwriteson.wordpress.com/
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Agree with Halloweeny like your last poem posted as I commented before. This spider poem of yours is so brilliantly disgusting. You are great at describing horror.
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Thanks again.
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My pleasure.
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Eww, ow, creepy, Halloweeny! Tis the season! Lol
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Wow! I am still trying to prevent myself from imagining the feeling of having a scary roaming inside me.
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Worst nightmare
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oh dear..this is too surreal.
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Oohhh yeahhh! Frank! This is awesome!! I love it.
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Thanks, Tara.
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I enjoyed this. It reminded me of a story, and I’ll recount it later on ChittleChattle. Thank you.
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Welcome.
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weirdly wonderful 🙂
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Thanks.
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Quite feeling down, but I don’t know it made me happy hehe 🙂 Cool!
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Thanks.
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I like this poem very much. The ending was so funny to me, despite being morbid lol. I also like how the spiders didn’t move until they got in the stomach. Great creative poem!
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Thank you
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Gross! (but funny)
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Um… thanks…
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Yuck! Happy Halloween… you can keep your creepy spiders. No thanks!
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Happy Halloween to you too.
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😄😄😆
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😄 Great 🕷🕸🕷
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Thanks.
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