Where have you been, my blue-eyed son?
The angels are a-calling
Tell them darling, you’re still not done
The rains are now a-falling
Your home not lays on this barren land
So little here to keep
You from flying. I fail to withstand
Your mother left to weep
God must love you a lot I suppose
Earth’s not for everyone
For the last time, I’ll hold you close
Hold you, my blue-eyed son

Well written and quite touching as well…
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❤️❤️ this. Sad and beautiful at the same time.
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This was a heartbreaking but wonderful write.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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This makes me ache. :_(
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Such a beautiful poem. Love your writing.
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Thank you, Sal.
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Very Sad.Your words touch the heart and churn out emotions of grief. Just the thought if losing a son is scary enough.
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Moving… I can’t bear to imagine somebody going through such pain of losing an angel.
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❤️
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Such a heartbreaking, beautiful, tragic poem.
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Thank you.
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Lovely piece with great emotional intensity. We must learn to let go of people and things in life, but it is so damn hard… You expressed everything very beautifully, although there is inevitable sadness. Loved it!
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Thanks a lot.
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You are welcome.
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Boy Frank when you let it out we all weep lol 🙂 Wonderfully emotional and deep. x
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Thank you so much, Deborah.
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A hard rains gonna fall… love the allusion intended or not.
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Completely intended. Thanks.
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Sad, and beautiful.
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Thank you.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you.
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You’ve hit my heart again. Left him 4 years ago to work hundred miles with memories of him still a baby. And with this masterpiece of yours, makes me longed for him terribly. Thank you expressing love. Sending your family hugs.
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Thanks for that.
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So sad.
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What a beautiful tribute.
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Thanks.
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Oh my gosh, very well done, but it brings a tear to my eyes.
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Beautifully written. If this is true for you, I send love to surround you and your family for nothing ever heals that hole that is left. I too know how it feels to lose a child 💗
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Thanks. It is not true though. But I appreciate your gift. Thanks.
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💜
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you.
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Not words, I suppose, but drops of warm tear. Well written!!
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Thank you.
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This made me cry, I lost my first (a son) in 1986, thank you for sharing it has touched a deep part of my heart. ❤️ As always I enjoyed reading your poem, it is sad but so true for many of us who have loved and lost a child. God gives us the strength and comfort even when we are at our worst!
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Thanks for sharing your deepest feelings. May you be blessed with love forever.
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Nicely presented. A subject that takes courage.
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Thank you.
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Feeling it.
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Well written
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Thank you.
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A beautiful poem. I hope that is all it is.
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I do too
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Same here
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Thanks. Yes, it is.
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This one makes me sad. Heaven doesn’t need more angels, but earth surely does.
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You are so.right.
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