Now my heart doesn’t feel so weak
Now my head doesn’t feel so wrong
Ever since you’ve left me
Baby I’ve been moving along
Making new friends
Meeting old friends
Now no ends
To my plans
You know how much I loved you
But you didn’t know how to love me back
Well now I’ve had it with you
Take the photos and paint them black
…
Little things you did to me
Little things that put me off
Now I know I feel so free
Baby I’ve just had enough
Writing new songs
Hearing old songs
There’s no wrong
With this song
You know that my love was true
But you didn’t know how to love me back
Now I know just what to do
Take those memories and paint them black
…
Now my heart doesn’t think about you
My head needs to show no care
Girl to you I bid adieu
In love and war all is fair
Forgetting past
Learning fast
Making joy last
Having a blast
You know how much I loved you
You didn’t know how to love me back
Now I know just what to do
Take my love and paint it black

I think I will have to read each of your posts and like them. You are gifted!
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Thank you so much.
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Your poem is really good!
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Powerful: take the pictures, take the memories – and paint them black.
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Thanks.
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The poem reverberates with strength. Love it.
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Wow! It’s so beautifully written…!!!
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Thank you.
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wow.
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Thanks.
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Wow, I’m just impressed! You’ve captured the emotions so well!!
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Thank you, Nathi.
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My pleasure! Keep writing and inspiring!
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Will do.
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Reblogged this on iWritative.
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Well done
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Thank you.
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Nice one!
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Thank you.
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Nice post
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She is happy if you’re happy, I think. Even if it means she has no space in your heart anymore. But take care of being arrogant. It still (a fact?) that at least one of you is broken.
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Will do. Thank you.
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This is really wonderful,
Frank. Great idea, well executed, as always.
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Thank you.
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Its a beautiful song about a sad feeling though.Loved these lines absolutely “Take my love and paint it black”.
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Oh, thanks a lot.
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—- you are a mean man, frank…
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She made me…
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That would make a great song Frank! You should find someone to write a melody for this ( or write the melody yourself). The words have a rhythm and you already have the chorus written.
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Someday, I’ll put all my songs together and make an album. Someday, definitely.
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I’ll be waiting.
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I was just about to say the same thing.
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😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏 stupendous!!!
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Thank you.
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Awesome … perfct words to express the feelings
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Thank you.
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Wow! Boy can I feel your words! well done!
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Thank you.
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