I had a thought. I had a dream. I had no worldly care
So I built for my own self some castles in the air
Tendered it with love. Shielded it night and day
A gust of wind came and blew my castles away
Castles In The Air
I had a thought. I had a dream. I had no worldly care
So I built for my own self some castles in the air
Tendered it with love. Shielded it night and day
A gust of wind came and blew my castles away
Frank Solanki 
Lovely poem.
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Your thoughts. Hats off.
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Thank you for liking “Luna’s.” I like how you were able to find a beautiful way to describe a sad but common human experience.
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Thanks ans welcome
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Very thoughtful and thought provoking
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😦
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Words wisely chosen
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Love this! 🙂
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Well written!
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Just love this!!
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This is my favorite post this week. How do you do it, Frank?
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Thank you. I am humbled
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Same.
Now your verse is stuck in my head. A job well-done.
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Mission accomplished
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Haha that little bird is always watching.
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What if you stood in the way of this wind
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I’d be blown away too
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How unfortunate
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I know
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So I picked up the sand once again to create a beautiful poem, maybe? 😁
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*You
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Thoughts. Not sand
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Metaphorically 🙂
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Beautiful and sad but also with a hope. You did have a dream.
It is the important thing, to have a dream and maybe follow it. Next time it might not blow away. 🦋 .
miriam
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Let’s hope so
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Weigh the belief of return, inhale, maybe?
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I can try
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Eloquent and erudite, brilliant piece Frank.
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Thats sad.
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Extremely
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This may be one of the best poems I’ve read in a long time.
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Thank you so much
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Lovely!!
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Awe, Frank!
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I felt this piece. Beautifully done. 🌟
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this poem is simply brilliant! It is well written and so eloquently stated.
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Short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoyed this.
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Simple but yet impactful. I’ve enjoyed reading your work.
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Your writing is So beautiful 💙
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