No sooner had I put a rock in my chest where my heart used to be
My veins connected their suspended ends to the silvery beast
And enveloped it completely
I smiled because I thought the transformation was taking place successfully
Because I thought that the plan was working
Because I assumed that there will be no more pain
How wrong was I!
My skin began to harden
My veins began to turn gray
My legs turned stiff
My head felt heavy
My eyelids wouldn’t blink
My nostrils wouldn’t twitch
The whole body was undergoing an unpleasant change
Then I fell
Face-first into the glistening sand
Devoid of life
Devoid of soul
Only a granite body for company
Along with the other massive rocks on the beach
As the golden sun awoke
The pain had disappeared, forever
The End

“No sooner had I put a rock in my chest where my heart used to be
My veins connected their suspended ends to the silvery beast
And enveloped it completely”
beautifully worded, frank! 💜
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Thank you so much! 😇
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Bonjour OU bonsoir MON AMI
Le jour vient de se lever ou de se coucher
Des mots me viennent à l’esprit
Pour te dire bonjour en toute amitié
Pour te souhaiter une bonne journée ou une bonne soirée
Une belle semaine à venir
Que chaque seconde de ce jour te soit de bonheur et de repos
Ainsi que pour ceux qui travail j’offre ces mots amicaux
Qu’ils vous accompagnent du matin au soir
Certains vont à l’école, d’autres au boulot, à chacun sa vie
Que ces petits mots de tendresse vous accompagnent
Bise amicale Bernard
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Wish you the same, Bernard. Have a blessed week! 😇🌟💫
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Thanks Frank . Happy Sunday to you. Anita
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To you too! 😇
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Very imaginative, with a tragic ending, Frank. Bravo!
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Thank you, John, especially for your encouraging words throughout this series. Appreciate it!
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As we say in Wales, croeso! (you’re welcome).
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You are right boss
I can’t contain my joy
Thanks boss for liking my blogs
You are blessed
Can we vibe on WhatsApp boss?
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bueno!!!
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🖐
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Wow this is intriguing and profound.
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Thanks 😇
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I like dramatic and tragic ending in this poem.
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Thank you, my friend. Have a great Sunday!
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Thank you and same to you.
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I can think of better solutions, Frank…
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But it wouldn’t make for a tragic ending 😁!!! Happy Sunday to you!!!
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I can’t argue with that, Frank…
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😁
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