If You Think That Love Is Perfect

If you think that love is perfect
Then you are a fool
You are yet to learn the basics
Come, go back to school

You expect love to be perfect
Wait! Did I hear ‘expect’?
If your love’s full of expectations
Then for you I’ve no respect

If you’re looking for a perfect love
You’re most probably ill
Love is flawed, love is silly
Far from perfect still

4 thoughts on “If You Think That Love Is Perfect

  1. Very congruent write. I absolutely love the flow of this piece! Although I can’t seem to pinpoint why exactly, but I feel there is a close connection between the developing message (the emotion of this piece) and the flow and play with assonance you develop through out. It felt like pulling on a thread that gradually but quickly undoes a piece of clothing.
    A truly fabulous write.
    👏👏👏

    Liked by 1 person

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