I hate the neighbour’s noisy dog
I hate the neighbours too
I hate every human being
Everyone except you
I hate the ones who keep me waiting
And the ones who talk a lot
I hate the ones who think they’re smart
And the ones who think they’re not
I hate the ones who are always asking
The questions that they’ve got
And the ones who are always giving
Responses on the spot
I wish that Earth was devoid of life
Except for me and you
For I hate all the human beings
And many more things too
I hate my friend who keeps forgetting
My money that he owes
I hate the birds that chirp all day
Don’t you get my woes?
I hate the clouds that bring the rain
I hate it when it snows
Am I always so miserable?
Oh well nobody knows
Nobody except you, my darling
What can they do to me?
I have given only you the rights
To make me more happy

(I hope you don’t get this comment twice. There seems to be a glitch with WordPress on mobile.)
You’re getting a number of preachy & disapproving comments from people looking down their nose at your “hate” instead of noting the playfulness and cleverness of the poem! They’re proving its point with precision. 😆 The fact that you wrote it at all is evidence you’re not a “hater”. Just another human using art to vent; any emotion can be fodder for creativity. Screw the drones.
There’s a war against “unhappiness” or “discomfort”, or just anything that doesn’t scream happy happy, joy joy… it depresses me with its shallow conformity. I look around and see massive schools of fish pivoting as one to follow the current thing (pun not intended). Our society has turned into a dull contest of sameness and compliance. Who can agree and comply the hardest?!
PS: keep this quote from Stephen King in your back pocket: “If you expect to succeed as a writer, rudeness should be the second-to-least of your concerns. The least of all should be polite society and what it expects. If you intend to write as truthfully as you can, your days as a member of polite society are numbered, anyway.”
PS2: i hope the comment goes through because I’m not trying a third time. I hate repeating myself!😜
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‘I wish that Earth was devoid of life
Except for me and you’
Brilliant, Frank.
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Thank you, my friend.
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Hope you find love to give you a different view:).
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Hate’s so easy to do and to say,
but with the time we’ve left, there is another Way…
Luke 6:27 But to those of you who will listen, I say: Love your enemies, do good to those who hate you, ..
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Thus is an incredible piece of literature!
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Ditto. Except, there is no “you”.
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its sad you are ignoring the blessing :p wake up and see the world. 🙂
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Be careful what you wish for! Without a solution to climate change, none of us will be here to tell the tale. 🙂❤❌👩🦰
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While we give the right to someone to make us happy gets the right to make us sad
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* sad too.. As we get easily hurt by them whom we love the most.. Just thought of adding my cents.. So sorry for that.. But nicely done.. 👍🏼😊🙏🏻😇
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Appreciate it.
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Seems you were talking to the ‘mirror’!
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