I was sleeping with an open mouth
A bee dropped by and headed south
Bees are beautiful
I can feel her now inside of me
She’s flying around my kidney
Bees are beautiful
Bees are intelligent
I’m sure she has a lot of brains
She is controlling all my veins
Bees are beautiful
Bees are intelligent
More beautiful and intelligent
She is making me do things
If I refuse, the brute stings
Bees are beautiful
Bees are intelligent
More beautiful and intelligent
Than any man
She now controls my right hand
She wrote a poem. Did you understand?

sweet
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lol!!!!!
i did understand.
your poetry are one of a kind
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Thanks a lot
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Bees are beautiful until they sting
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Haha. True
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I love this one! You’re such a talented writer 🙂
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very cleverly written poem on Bee is wonderful.I like your selection of ideas.
Thanks for liking my MURKY EVENING. A COMMENT FROM YOU WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT.
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BeeinSolanki. That was calling for more! A marvelous read.
Thanks again also for visiting nothingcluelesslost.com and Remembering the Slums.
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loved it!
is the bee controlling you even now?? ;-);-)
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No not anymore. Thankfully
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haha…loved your answer 🙂
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The poem is beautiful. I love it.
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Thank you
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Lovely..
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Good
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Very fun and brilliant!
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Thank you
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All five flavors to taste. I linked my artist friend to your poem — it reminded me so much of her, I felt compelled to let her know. 😀
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Cool
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Bee wanna say something – ‘bee my friend ‘ your bee is much beautiful and intelligent than mine 😊🐝🐝
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Haha. Thanks
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🐝
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Love it!!!
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Thank you
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I loved the creativity in the poem 👍👍👍☝️. Feeling the vibes here 😃😃😃
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like your poems. do check out mine and tell me if they are good enough.
https://wordpress.com/posts/inkedmemory.wordpress.com?verified=1
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This is great, made me smile! Buzzzz
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Thanks
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Bee-utiful insight and a bee-utiful poetry.🐝❤
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Thank you
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This is amazing and out of box poem.I loved it ,Frank!
ravi
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Nice one…
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wow… profound
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Ingenious!!!!!!
Amazed at the imagination
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Thank you
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Bee good
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Follow my blog. Just getting this one started
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So, YES?!?!?
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Sure. I’ll be glad
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I definitely need to add my profile picture, bc that looks ridiculous if you are seeing the same thing as me
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I cannot see anything, my friend
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I’d love to try some of your poetry on my new blog. Would be perfect and you would get full credit for all your work. Check out my newest barely started blog and read the description of it.
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Interesting
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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One of my Solanki favourites!
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So glad to know you enjoyed it
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I love it 🙂
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Thank you
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Oh, that was cute!
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I do understand lolol I love it!!!! Superb job! Xx
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Thank you
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You’re welcome! God bless and take care! Xx
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Love this
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Clever.
I sat a squat nearby a lake,
between my legs, a slithering snake.
Those hot tamales of last night’s fling,
burned a squirt, inflamed brown ring.
The reptile spied the fetid cave,
and made to breach, myself its slave.
The squirming now has settled down,
But from my mouth a hissing sound.
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Cool
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I love this!! Definitely one of my favorites.
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Thank you
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Hmmm stinging honey I presume.
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Sort of
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Clever bee!
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Indeed
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That was a bad poem. *sting*…
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Oops
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creative!
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I enjoy the whimsy in this.
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Very nice!
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Bees r the best!! And where’s honey?
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Yet to pollinate
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Nice! Made me smile. 😬
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Glad to hear that
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Bee-autifully done!
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Haha. Thanks
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Haha loved it! 🙂
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ops 😛 nice poem
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Thank you
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I love your poems, whether written by you or your bee. Haha
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Haha. The bee thanks you
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Haha, that was a fun ride.
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Thank you
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