Two hungry friends
Staring at each other
One found a solution
And ate the other
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Two Hungry Friends
Two hungry friends
Staring at each other
One found a solution
And ate the other
Love it! First time I’ve seen a cannibal poem
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Thank you
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Feeling dark? Or humorous? Or both?
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Just humorous. Hehe. Wanted to make this a little longer but stopped her. Thought it would suffice
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Editing is always a challenge. When the flow stops it’s usually best not to press on. This works well just as is.
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True
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Fairly and Most rality,, Nice poem,,
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🙂
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You are sounding more and more like Shell Silverstein! (<:
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Except for the fact that I am taller than an inch
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Reblogged this on WordDancer in the Sky.
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Had to happen
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Hehe
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😀😀
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Deadly Dangerous Friendship.
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Exactly
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….And what about those heroines who don’t want to change their sex?
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They can change their minds
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Oh.
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Oh dear… 🙂
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Really funny Frank! 😂
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What are you like! 😇
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Trying to be funny
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ironic
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Indeed
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Haha! I couldn’t help but laugh. I loved this! 🙂
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That’s true love. Allowing yourself to be food so your love will survive. Very profound.
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Didn’t read the comments because I didn’t want to be swayed…
But I read this as the sad story of some relationships in which the taker devours the giver.
Well done…provocative.
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These are just 4 lines. And it could be interpreted in a million ways. But what you just said was exactly how I felt as I wrote them
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Kindred spirits, you and I. Hope your day has moments of joy. HUGS!
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Same to you
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Provocative ! A hint to the cutthroat competition and prevalent sentiments?Brevity speaks volumes. Just loved it.
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Short and sweet (perhaps it was dessert?)
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Hehe
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I love it!
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This is ridiculous and scandalous at the same time 🙂
The poem gave me tingling mixed feelings
Also remind me of T.bag and his friend in the desert (Prison break)
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Nice
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SCARY! LOL. Oh goodness. But, good, nonetheless!
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You’re welcome.
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Take care, my friend. Have a nice day
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Thank you. You too.
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Sadly, a lot of this in today’s ‘all about me’ world.
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Exactly
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That’s great!
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Welp there ya have it! problem solved! hahaa good one Frank!
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This was dark and amusing. My feed had a preview of the first three lines, and that conveyed the thought too. Really good! 🙂
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Thank you
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