Is this world what it seems?
Is there more to bring?
The clouds are getting darker
It just isn’t pouring
…
We’re dancing over graves
Where the bees have left a sting
The clouds are getting darker
It just isn’t pouring
…
We’re hunting in pairs
Inside a fiery ring
The clouds are getting darker
It just isn’t pouring
…
The voices have been lost
Through which we used to sing
The clouds are getting darker
It just isn’t pouring
…
Tell me your secret
Trust me with this thing
The clouds are getting darker
It just isn’t pouring
…
Loss is mine and yours
Foes are in waiting
The clouds are getting darker
It just isn’t pouring
…
The clouds are getting darker
It just isn’t pouring
Soon it will
You’ll remember everything

Like your use of form … and your twist at conclusion. This has a punch!
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Thanks a lot
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Thought-provoking words! π
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Thank you
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I would love to thank you for liking my post dr friend.. Thank you very much.. And also I loved this poem and will check on ur posts for sure.ππ
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Thanks and welcome
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Cheers.ππ
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Have a nice day
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πππsame to u friend.ππ
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The clouds are getting darker but, hell no IΒ΄m not telling you my secret!
Nice read by the way
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Thanks
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It’s a beautiful one π
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Thank you
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Hello…..
I am pleased to inform you that I truly enjoy the majority of the content contained on your site. ….
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Join me….,”FOLLOW THE TRUTH!”
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Inspiring ! Hey I was wondering you if theres a way I can privately contact you, I had some questions. Thank you!
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you
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Such an inspirational post. Amazing!
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When it rains , you”ll remember everything…..So dark clouds hold memories not remembered…. ?
A poem that says a lot about what is unsaid….
Thought provoking.
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Thank you. The poem is open to interpretations as you may please. Have a nice day
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It will rain eventually. The water in the clouds have to go somewhere. The question is where…
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Nice
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your post throws light on the ugly truth of the world of today. thanks for sharing
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Welcome
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pleasure
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It surely is not just down-pouring now, but have you seen
Oh my friend, a cloud so thick and dark that has never seen rain?
There is only faith that remains, that is the sun will light and there Bright morning sun
Will come and take you in his arms in his own might.
And then my friend, there would light, and you will have life. Hallelujah Amen.
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Amen, my friend. Amen
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hey, i just want to thank you for liking my post! it’s nice to know that people actually read my blog. i hope we inspire each other π
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Thanks for reading mine. Have a nice day
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