This cracks me up. Fair warning for sure. “Just letting you know.” Juicy ironic twist, to use that phrase that makes it seem like no big deal, but which so often is announcing a bomb about to be dropped, or that has just dropped.
To me, it’s pretty good. It reminds me of some things that come to me, that I originally think will be great as a short poem, but I realize there’s actually a lot more to it that needs to get expressed, so I write a longer poem, expressing it. Sometimes I post it, sometimes not.
Sometimes I wish I’d have managed to keep it short.
I get the feeling there might be more story behind this one. If you think so, too, you might play with it, and see what comes out.
Nice to have the “Head up people” but I would question the results if given the heads up.
Surely those that give the heads up, are those that don’t want to kill. Bless ’em
This cracks me up. Fair warning for sure. “Just letting you know.” Juicy ironic twist, to use that phrase that makes it seem like no big deal, but which so often is announcing a bomb about to be dropped, or that has just dropped.
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This isn’t one of my best works but it sure sounds funny
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To me, it’s pretty good. It reminds me of some things that come to me, that I originally think will be great as a short poem, but I realize there’s actually a lot more to it that needs to get expressed, so I write a longer poem, expressing it. Sometimes I post it, sometimes not.
Sometimes I wish I’d have managed to keep it short.
I get the feeling there might be more story behind this one. If you think so, too, you might play with it, and see what comes out.
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I’ll give it a try
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Hello, I was that Earthquake
I didn’t know we were supposed to warn you.
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It’s alright. I am forever warned
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Wow, I love this!
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Thanks
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I’m a tiny flower
on the little mountain
calls your name
over and over
will you answer me? ~
Nice lines!
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Thank you
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😉 This sounds like a little boy who says I am a demon, Get scared of me will ya ?
I am shuddering….
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Lol, nice but I don’t want to be first.
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Don’t worry. You’re not
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Nice to have the “Head up people” but I would question the results if given the heads up.
Surely those that give the heads up, are those that don’t want to kill. Bless ’em
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Bless them all
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Love this!
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Thanks
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