Let Mercury be marbled
Let Venus be virtued
Let Earth be your emerald
And brighten all that is you
Let Mars be your moon
Let Jupiter be your jewel
Let Saturn come a little soon
Or it would be too cruel
Let Uranus be our unity
Let Neptune bring something new
You can, then, have all of me
And I will have all of you
This is beautiful!
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You’re welcome š
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Take care. And have a nice day
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of all these my favorite are Jupiter and Venus …you got any faves
of course keeping aside emerald earth
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Yeah, I love Mercury
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So beautiful! I like the use of planets, lovely!
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Thanks
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Amazing poem really excites the imagination.
~SS
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Wow amazing. Reblogging this please š
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Sure. Thanks
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That is so sweet…. Its perfect!
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Thanks a lot
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I have serious doubts now… and curious to know… more about you. Two immediate posts of you are extremely contradictory .
Your words are not just coming from any imagination… ! (I believe so)
…. or otherwise… probably you are too good in playing with others’ imaginations and feelings, if your posts have nothing to do with real life.
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My posts have nothing to do with real life. I play with my own imagination and feelings
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This is very well-written, but I have to admit that my attention was drawn particularly to the line regarding Earth…the emerald…
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oh! gosh! wow!
wonderful š
Nx
hi
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Thank you. Hi
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Frank, your diction is terse yet meaningful. I appreciate you for letting my imagination take its course. If you have any free time, please feel free to read my blog. It would be unreal to get your input.
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Thanks for that
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Reblogged this on Lost Dudeist Astrology.
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Divine
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Thank you
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Beautiful.
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Thank you
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