Lovely syntax and word choice, although I’m a tad confused as to why you would profess your love for winter in the beginning of the poem and then proceed to only mention her faults.
NICE just like always..hhmm but I kinda have something important to ask you. I’ve decided to participate in the wordpress course “Everyday inspiration” where everyday a task is given to me in order to get inspired and day12’s task is to criticize a piece of art or work, directly your poems came into mind..So my question is to know whether or not you would honour me with the permission of critising any poem of my choice..Thanks for your time, awaiting a response all that is left for me is to wish you a great week. Chaio
Thank yu very much..NNAAHH I prefer asking permission ’cause it would piss me off if someone did that without my permission.. Do to others what you want done to you..Thanks again 😀
Great poem!
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Nice poem.. Love winter.. 🙂 keep writing
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Beautifully laid !! Keep writing =D
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Hey, thanks
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Lovely syntax and word choice, although I’m a tad confused as to why you would profess your love for winter in the beginning of the poem and then proceed to only mention her faults.
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That’s the beauty of poetry. It seldom makes sense to others. Hehe. Have a nice day
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Fair enough. You too, sir.
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NICE just like always..hhmm but I kinda have something important to ask you. I’ve decided to participate in the wordpress course “Everyday inspiration” where everyday a task is given to me in order to get inspired and day12’s task is to criticize a piece of art or work, directly your poems came into mind..So my question is to know whether or not you would honour me with the permission of critising any poem of my choice..Thanks for your time, awaiting a response all that is left for me is to wish you a great week. Chaio
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I will be very much honoured. And you can do that even if it wasn’t a task. And you don’t have to ask for permission. Have a great week too
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Thank yu very much..NNAAHH I prefer asking permission ’cause it would piss me off if someone did that without my permission.. Do to others what you want done to you..Thanks again 😀
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Welcome. Take care
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posting this on facebook too 😀
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Wow. Thanks
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Love this! Reblogged on Expressions.
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Thank you
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Hey your poetry is super dope! Thanks for following me!
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Thanks
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