This Lonely Heart Of Mine

~ Frank Solanki

I know I am going to regret this
I know I am going to regret this
I know I am going to regret this, for sure
If I don’t get to see you anymore

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Every word is a beginning
Every word is a beginning
Every word is a beginning of a war
If I don’t write to you anymore

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It won’t be a home
It won’t be a home
It won’t be a home behind this door
If you don’t grace this place anymore

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I will never be the same
I will never be the same
I will never be the same as before
If you are not here with me anymore

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You will need to save me
You will need to save me
You will need to save me and more
I can’t go on like this anymore

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I can’t go on like this anymore
I can’t go on like this anymore
I can’t go on like this anymore
I just can’t go on like this anymore

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Published by Frank Solanki

Making the world a better place one poem at a time.

12 thoughts on “This Lonely Heart Of Mine”

  1. Dear Frank who are the people? I liked Not Myself Anymore but this is not so poetic as it is common place. Where you writing this or singing it in your head? My life started at 8 years old and I have been a Seer ever since. I write from me but not alwsys for me. Being obcessed with someone is not a very inspirine muse. As for repetition, try a 2, 3 or 4 count. A1count is what bad song writers do not poets. The heart of what you are expressing is well felt but your repetitiveness distracts me. If I did not feel the potential of your words I would not have made this effort.
    Thank you for sharing
    Reachmewalter
    ( Walter Latif )

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  4. I love the repetition and rhyme scheme, how it all feels like dwelling constantly on the same thought, good use of style 🙂 I’ll have to try it myself now ;p

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