If you think that love is perfect
Then you are a fool
You are yet to learn the basics
Come, go back to school
You expect love to be perfect
Wait! Did I hear ‘expect’?
If your love’s full of expectations
Then for you I’ve no respect
If you’re looking for a perfect love
You’re most probably ill
Love is flawed, love is silly
Far from perfect still
That’s the truth. Love is flawed deeply. Beautifully written.
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Very congruent write. I absolutely love the flow of this piece! Although I can’t seem to pinpoint why exactly, but I feel there is a close connection between the developing message (the emotion of this piece) and the flow and play with assonance you develop through out. It felt like pulling on a thread that gradually but quickly undoes a piece of clothing.
A truly fabulous write.
👏👏👏
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Human love is definitely not perfect.
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