You made me climb a mountain
You made me swim a sea
I ran a hundred miles
For a love that never was
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You pushed me off a cliff
Down a desolate ditch
With a love that never was
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You took over my body
My heart and every limb
Left me empty and stranded
Like a love that never was
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You bled me till I could bleed no more
You played me till I could no longer be played
Now love seems like an unjust cause
Because of a love that never was
Been there…. Wicked shit.
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Your writing flows, I like that.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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A wonderful poem!
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Thank you.
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Love how the ending says it all. Thanks for sharing!
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You are welcome.
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The Love that never was is still a Love. Nice work.
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Poignant poem!
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Thanks.
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To have once felt it deeply, realizing it was a fraud, well….
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🙌Beautiful!!
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Thank you.
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LOL oh frank. I don’t mean to make light of the pain and frustration expressed in your poem. I am reminded of my own little “I’ll punch your face in” song
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Oh Frank. This is absolutely beautiful. Heart wrenching but beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.
Rae x
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Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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The saddest love of all!
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Poignant!
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Thanks.
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Another great one Frank. Boy this was brutal. Great, but brutal
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Thanks, Tim.
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You are welcome.
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Beautiful. I really like the metaphors in this piece.
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Thank you.
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I don’t understand why actual human beings do that to other humans.
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