When she cared for me
And cooked great food
Hated shopping and said
“Gossip’s no good.”
I knew that she was the one
…
When she knew about football
More than most
And talked for hours
Like a nerdy coach
I knew that she was the one
…
When she laughed at my jokes
Though they weren’t great
And calmed me down
When I was irate
I knew that she was the one
…
When I forgot to wish her
On her birthday
She didn’t feel bad
No sorrow or dismay
I knew that she was the one
…
When she read my poems
And declared them best
And never reminded me
Of unresponded texts
I knew that she was the one
…
When she praised my body
And didn’t find it odd
And told me I looked
Like a Greek God
I knew that she was the one
…
When she was ten feet
And her skin was blue
And everything else was
Too good to be true
I knew it was just a dream
That’s lovely ❣️
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Thank you.
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Ahhh!
Only a dream!
Damn.
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Only a dream? Man! But what a good dream, though!
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LOL! Reblogging to my readers at sister site Timeless Wisdoms
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Ah, man…
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Lovely, Frank 💛 So she was the one, and what a strange twist at the end! But she’s still the one, apparently. It was a dream apparently that everything was too good to be true and that she was blue or ten feet. Lol. Have a nice day 🧡 thanks for that 🙂
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Love it!!!
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Thanks.
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LOL!!!!!
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Oh no why did it have to be just a dream!
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That was fantastic! It played in my mind almost like Rocket 88.
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Lol
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This. Is. Awesome.
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Thank. You.
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Waking up missing the the one
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Excellent! I really like this one.
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Thanks, Tim.
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Damn!! What a rude awakening!!
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Oh i was so in love with her for you Frank! And then she just disappeared into a dream x
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I love this. 😀
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Thanks.
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We are all so selfish. Love blossoms only on what we want. No wonder it was just a dream.
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“The Ones” are always a little odd but no matter what they are still “The One”. Ain’t nobody like them.
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This is beautiful.. she really sounds perfect, that’s too bad that it was a dream. But, I know, that dreams do come through… 👍
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Wow, was not expecting the end. Loved the twist.
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besides being a dream, makes me wonder in reality how we always have all this good pointers, and just that one pointer spoils it all. lovely poem.
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Thanks.
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I really liked this! The twist at the end is so sad. Good job.
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Thanks.
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Too good to be true
I knew it was just a dream
A beautiful dream ♥️
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Dreams can seem so convincing, so very lifelike, and then something gives it away. Don’t you hate it when that happens?
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