I fell in love with her
With her strange, mysterious ways
Her calm and soothing voice
Her scary, haunting gaze
Her transparent nature
Her wild and violent head
The way she made me fly
And hover above my bed
I fell in love with her
But she could never be mine
Not today, not tomorrow
In this world or time
I had to leave it all
That’s what hurts the most
Love’s too small a word
When you love a ghost
Wow, the ending is so ambiguous and breath taking. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks a lot.
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Love this! Great ending
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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What a paradox, if she let her clear nature be seen by you perhaps she thought she’ll be too much for you, perhaps she’s scared of the power she wields so she’s desperately trying to protect you from its ruin, cos believe it ppl like that won’t show you themselves to start with if you didn’t make her heart beat.
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Now, your in the spirit. Phantasmagorical. Ardor for an apparition. Spontaneity for a specter. Gushing for a ghoul.
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Yes! This is wonderful!!
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This was very good, nice twist at the end!
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Now Frank, did it have to be a ghost? You know how people are when it comes to something like that. Anyhow, I enjoy reading your blogs. Take care.
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At least she’d never lie to you, because you’d always see right through her. 😆
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Ha-ha. Well said.
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“Love’s too small a word
When you love a ghost”
Very true😀😀😀
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Wow! I am still digesting that. There is so much depth in the poem. Is she really a ghost? Or is it simply impossible to capture and contain her spirit with your love? Would the love have suffocated her wild and unbroken spirit? Thanks for the puzzle, Frank. 👍
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A puzzle it is for sure. Even I am unable to figure it out. Ha-ha. What if I am a ghost and she is not?
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Oh man, I never even considered that. This is why I love your poetry. Keep it coming. Thanks so much.
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You’re most welcome.
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🙂
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🖤🖤🖤💘
I fell for someone ..not falling for me… I guess i’ll just think that he’s a ghost…,🍃🍃🍃
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😂😂😂 When You Love A Ghost. Tremendous.
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Thanks.
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That. Was. Excellent.
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Thank. You. So. Much.
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Oh lament, one could never compete with the dead. They’re already perfect in your mind, compared to the mess before your eyes.
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So true.
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Very nice.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome
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Nice twist
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Thank you.
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