She sees things in the dark
She suffers every day
With her I also suffer
Suffer in every way
Sometimes she sees ghosts
Sometimes; ravens and crows
Sometimes she just cries
Reasons that only heaven knows
Tonight she woke me up
I felt her sweaty hand
She said she saw something
Something disturbing again
I asked her about the matter
She mumbled with a heavy breath
She held my hand tighter
“I think I saw your death.”
Awesome poem.
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Awesome poem.
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I love your writing. I have not seen so much growth in writing as I have in yours. Over the time that I have followed your blog, I’ve seen your words flourish from beautiful to vibrant, and I get so much from your words and enjoy reading your posts. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much. It means a lot to hear that.
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WOW!
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The things we find in the darkness… great poem!
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Now we’re getting somewhere – or, into the Nowhere.
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Verry cool.
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You are welcome.
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Eary!!!!
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Great poem and I couldn’t imagine a better ending than the one you gave it. 🙂
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Thanks a lot.
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Dementia or hallucination or premonition, amazing lines. Food for thought this Holy Easter 🐣 Weekend.
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That was kreepy.
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Wow… 😲
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Thank you.
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Oh that made me shiver !
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Me, too!
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Amazing isn’t it!
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So dark and beautiful at the same time. Really. It’s a very nice piece 👌
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soooooo uuuumm great poem just had premonition
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Hmm, I have noticed some heavy themed poems from you lately. Can’t say I don’t love them.
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Thanks.
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Great work🖤
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Thank you.
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Oh god. No way would I tell you if I saw that.
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