I’ll stand on the ocean
I’ll breathe in the storm
I’ll walk on the edges
Till things don’t change
I’ll stand under the rain
In the deepest dark forests
Of a forgotten world
Till things don’t change
I’ll watch the meteors fall
Asteroids hit the earth
Without even blinking
Till things don’t change
I’ll fly with the wind
Wrestle with the waves
Kiss the barren land
Till things don’t change
I’ll tell it and think it
And speak it and breathe it
I’ll stand on the ocean
Till things don’t change
And so I’ll stand…
Simply beautiful!
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I love your imagery. So creative.
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Thank you.
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Talented! I was there, on the ocean. Thankyou ☺️
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Welcome.
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I love the rhythm…and the theme kind of reminds me a little of Dover Beach, one of my all-time favorites. This is beautiful. Thanks for the like on my post about losing followers 🙂 You are one of my tribe!
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Thanks for that!
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I like your piece and am following your page! Hopefully you can check out my poems on my facebook page. https://www.facebook.com/Vincent-Heart-1562332773863590/
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I love the cadence of this poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks and welcome.
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❤️
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Thanks.
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First of all, thanks for your “like” on my recent photo at sixstrstories.com. Secondly, after reading “I’ll Stand On The Ocean,” I’m guessing that you’re a fan of Bob Dylan’s “A Hard Rain’s A-Gonna Fall.”
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Yes I am. And there are more similar posts if you happen to scroll a little.
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you filled me with passion now …..
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My work here is done.
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your poems are always so good .. me and my friends always wonder from where did you get such words… keep writing such poems 🙂
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Thanks a lot.
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Change is inevitable, though.
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Yep. True.
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Our words become our lives. May you see everything change in your favor always. ❤️
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Thanks for that.
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Unfortunately, change is the one constant. 💛
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Yep. True.
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Bravo!
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Thanks.
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Such a wonderful piece! Really powerful as well. Loved it!!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful! The imagery is amazing. My favorite lines: “I’ll watch the meteors fall, Asteroids hit the earth, Without even blinking”.
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Nice lines
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Thank you.
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Undoubtedly my favourite poem by you from you so far. Such power in the nature imagery, it gives life to your words. I love the idea of ‘breath[ing] in the storm’. x
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Thank you.
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There is nothing ever new underneath the sun, Frank.
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Really?
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Took my mind here. there and everywhere 🙂 x
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Ah nice.
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Oh I love this!
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Thanks.
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Very nice, thank you
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Thanks and welcome.
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Lovely text. Nature sure do heals us inside out!
Thank you for liking my post earlier 💖
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Thanks and welcome.
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Nice lines Frank
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A very powerful and thoughtful piece. Well dine Frank.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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Nice, but only a superhuman can do that.
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Yes, thanks though.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you.
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A beautiful work, Frank. I felt the tides.
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Thank you.
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This was wonderful. A pleasure to read.
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Thank you.
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interesting! love the brevity.
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Thank you, Leonardo.
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