When I’m lying in my bed
With a thousand thoughts in my head
Amongst the chaotic crowd
Only one thought stands out loud
The thought of you is stuck to me
When you’re not close to me
It’s a shame we have to be away
A moment seems so long today
You are the light that shines in me
The beat that my heart beats
The love that fills my empty soul
The love that makes me complete
Everything else seems so forlorn
I can’t seem to remember anyone, anything, anymore except you
…
Give me what I need now
I need to have you somehow
The cracks are there to let you in
This is the end where I begin
My story yearns for an happy ending
When stars are dead and sun’s ascending
Never to die or lose the way
A moment seems so long today
You are the light that shines in me
The beat that my heart beats
The love that has me in control
The love that makes me complete
You’ve got me feeling reborn
I can’t seem to remember anyone, anything, anymore except you
…
Lift me up to the sky
From this place where I do lie
Drop me down without a clue
And I’ll land right in the arms of you
For you guard my heart
Never let it fall apart
And I have no more words to say
A moment seems so long today
You are the light that shines in me
The beat that my heart beats
The love that fills my empty soul
The love that makes me complete
Everything else seems so forlorn
I can’t seem to remember anyone, anything, anymore except you
Love your words very beautiful and truthful in the emotional state. Beauty.
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Powerful and beautiful!
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Amazing
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Beautiful literally gave me the feels!! Amazing work
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I love it.
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You’re welcome 😀
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Such a thoughtful poem, something anyone can relate to i think. Great reading your poems!
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Thank you for sharing your heart with us:) Beautiful person you are.
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This is beautiful. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Oh my word. This is absolutely perfect and speaks to me in a way that I cannot describe. I’ve reblogged this on my site, I hope you do not mind.
What you’ve written here is what been written on my heart for the love of my life, but you… … You’ve done it so masterfully. So beautifully.
Thank you for this piece.
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Thank you. Keep blooming
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😀 Thank you!!!!!
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Reblogged this on Rose in Full Bloom and commented:
This is a poem by one of my favorite word press poets. For those who follow my blog, you know that I am in a long distance relationship. The emptiness that I feel when I miss my Saint us indescribable, until today. I could never put it into perfect words how he makes me feel and how bad I need and will always need him. Luckily, Frank pulled out the most perfect and correct words to create this beautiful piece that speaks for me.
My Saint, I would like to dedicate this piece to you, if Mr. Solanki wouldn’t mind. I love you handsome. And thank you Frank, for speaking my heart.
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You are most welcome
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your words warm my heart! beautiful
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VERY nice! Thanks for a bit of beauty to begin my day!
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This makes me say a cliche … no pain, no gain. 😅
Our redemption lay in the lessons gained of the pain of shame. We need only forgive ourselves for not knowing. 😏
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True
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The word “beautiful”. though uttered many times already by others, is the first adjective that comes to mind; I can’t think of another more fitting.
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Thank you so much
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Amazing! You already know how much i like your work… this was just mind blowing😍
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Thank you so much
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I nominated you for an award! Check out my most recent blog post!
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Oh thank you
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Beautiful and touching as always
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Beautiful!
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OMG!! This is beautiful.. its amazing ❤
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Nice piece
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Such a sweet heart. Love, every positivity, joy, compassion, forgiveness. Such a pure heart to me. But I pray you would love God the Father, more than anyone, or anything. Always keep this love in your heart, love is more than anything to me. It is love, pure love, that changes, anything. The reason is this: God is love and love is God. And God is all you will ever need, to make your life, mean something. Just a Word from me. God is my Light, He shines, through me. But a lantern, is what the world will see. Even though it is He who is the Light, which shines through me. Take care, Frank Solanki 🙂
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This is simply beautiful
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👌👌
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This is extremely good. I love ❤️ it.
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A powerful use of language to express your message
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What key is this in Frank the question was posed, I believe it is in the key to the heart?
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Possibly
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💯👏👏👏💓💓💓✨✨✨
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Exquisite !
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That was so beautiful…
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My pleasure.
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What key is this in? 🎼
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I don’t know
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This is beautifully written ✨ in love with this❤️
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Thank you for this. 🙂
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You are most welcome
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“The cracks are there to let you in / This is the end where I begin” My favorite line. Nice!
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Beautiful ❤
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A powerfully poignant poem Frank. Lovely!
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This is absolutely beautiful. Definitely one of your best that I’ve read anyway.
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Thank you so much
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“The cracks are there to let you in” 👏👏👏
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Yay! Loveliness.. Thank you, Frank!
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Welcome
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I really love it! new subscriber here 🙂 looking forward for your future blogs.
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Wow. Thank you
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Beautiful.one of your best I have read recently.
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Thank you so much
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Frank. This is your best work yet. I love the recurring last line on every stanza that ties it all together. This could be a love ballad. It flows Well, the rhymes are not ambiguous, it’s just a great poem. You need to find a competition that you can enter this in. Dave
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Oh thank you so much. That is quite a compliment you just paid me
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