Let me tell you about my man
He is kind and sweet
He makes me feel special
But also incomplete
…
Whenever I am upset
A smart joke he would crack
He does the same with other girls
And flirts behind my back
…
He hangs out with other girls
More often than he does with me
He assures me, “They’re just friends.
You’re the only one for me.”
…
He remembers all about those girls
Every word that they say
Every little thing they do
But forgets my birthday
…
He’s found a new girl lately
Drives her around in his car
I wish I could pluck her eyeballs out
But I would never go that far
…
I’ve been waiting in this cafe
For an hour or maybe more
I guess he’s forgotten all about me
He was supposed to be here at four
Frank Solanki 
Is that Charlie? That girl should never have left the first guy.
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I know. So unfortunate
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You are welcome! Love to read your words!
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Thanks again. You are most welcome. Appreciate your comments
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Both parts are superb!
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Thank you so much
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It is very wonderful…
I might want to make a version too
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Sounds cool. Thank you
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Very well written! Charlie busted
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Yes. Thank you
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Thank you for encouraging me by liking my post
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Welcome
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Karma is a bitch……what you do ….that’s what you get…..nice one…..😄😄
Keep smiling. ..😊😊
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So true. Thank you. You keep smiling too
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Oh no! 😟
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Oh yes
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Whyyy?
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What goes around comes around
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Mm… can’t argue with that one.
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Fickle guy, fun poem!
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Thank you
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Jack fell down — broke his crown — and Jill came tumbling after.
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What goes around comes around…
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Haha. Yes it does
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Good one, Frank. Had us in.
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Thank you
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this is a great follow up to Part 1. well done
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Thank you
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You captured well the mindset of the unrequited but always hopeful woman. As mentioned above, it always takes too long to put up with that kind of pain. Well done Frank.
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Poorly worded, sorry. I meant to say that the unrequited lovers put up with crumbs, and is in pain for too long. Charlie Williams will not change.
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True
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Thank you
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Such a wonderful read. thank you
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Welcome
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More than time to let him go 🙂
Really enjoyed your piece, it takes us so much time to realise we deserve better.
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True. Thanks
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Very enjoyable! I’d like to hear in Charlie Williams No More…how she decides to give him the elbow and move on!
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Haha. Maybe some day
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You had me at plucking her eyeballs out! hahahaha 🙂
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Haha. Thanks
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Seems like Charlie was not what he was cracked up to be, lol.
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Yes. Haha
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I’m not so sure about that, WaltPage…I saw Charlie as a bad egg from the very first stanza. He seems to me EXACTLY what he was cracked up to be. 😉 😁
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Nice use of the egg comparison. 😈
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Oh Ouch. So busted.
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Yup. Haha
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