My girl is a sweet heart
Her love for me is true
But when she met Charlie Williams
She said, “He’s better than you.”
…
Charlie’s got the riches
He has nailed the looks
He’s witty and intelligent
He reads all sorts of books
…
Charlie’s got the finest clothes
Drives around in a fancy car
“He’s got the perfect smile,” she says
“And he even plays the guitar”
…
My girl’s going out with him
They look happy together too
I ain’t one bit jealous
I ain’t feeling blue
…
Now Charlie, you may not know me
But I’ve got some words for you
Better kill all finer men
Or she will leave you too
Frank Solanki 
Hahahahaha! 😂😂😂😂
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That was witty!😁
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Welcome.
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Have a nice day
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I will. Wish you the same.
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Really good 👍
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Love this one
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This is cool, I love the last Part ‘ Better kill all finer men Or she will leave you too’
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Woah!!! Love it👏👏
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Charlie Williams may have everything, but he cannot create such beautiful poetry, as frank does 😜
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Oh wow. Thank you
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You’re Welcome 😀
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Love it! And I appreciate the rhyme schemes–I’m not very fond of poems which don’t rhyme 😀
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Yup. What good is a poem that doesn’t rhyme?
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😂🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣
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Heheeee……made me laugh but That’s true…..beautifully written man…..seriously loved it…..😍😄😄
Keep smiling frank…..and writing like this….😃😃😃
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Thank you so much
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You nailed it with that one!
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Good one!
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Great ballad! This and and part 2! Two points of view. How about setting this to music?
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Thanks. Maybe someday I will
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I think my girl found Charlie too – that bastard!!
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Haha. Go out and celebrate
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Great ending 🙂
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Thanks
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True!
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Hahaha…..beautiful.
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Fun and clever, Frank!
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Thank you
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:’D
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Reblogged this on Jonathan Pines Poetry.
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Methinks that Charlie’s days are numbered.
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Me thinks so too
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Wow. The last para was good. Reminded me of the song ‘ i am not an actor’ by mltr.
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I loved it 😍
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Right on
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I know
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True!
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hhahahahha i woke up , i read this and it made me smile!!! 🙂
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Good morning, my friend
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Good morning Frank..:)
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That dastardly Charlie Williams, love it!
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This is amazing!!!! Love it ❤️
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Hahahaha gave me a good laugh! And so well written! 🙂
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The vanity of this life will pass away, but love remains forever.
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True
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HA! Very good.
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Unexpected, I love it.
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mind if i share?
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perfectly said. hahah love this! 😁
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This one has cracked me up.
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Glad you enjoyed it
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mind if I share?
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lol good one!
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Hahaha, good one… Beware of the gold digger.
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Haha. Thanks
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Words to the wise! 🙂
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Yes
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Awesome! thank you for giving me a smile and a chuckle. Wish I had your words back when!! 🙂
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Oh well better late than never. Glad to know you enjoyed it
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perfect, frank
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I love this!
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