Paint it on my death bed
Paint it on my forehead
Paint it anywhere you want
Paint it as I’ve said
He handled my affairs
I’ve had my share of care
I know He always listened
He always answered my prayers
Keep me safe from harm
Keep me safe and warm
Call me in your tender home
Call me in your arms
He freed me from my chains
Kept me from sin and men
Pulled me through the darkest nights
So I’ll sing again
Paint it on my death bed
Paint it on my forehead
Paint it anywhere you want
Paint it as I’ve said
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Beautiful words!
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Glory be to God for putting this in your heart.
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Hi There,
I was hoping to send this to you directly, but couldn’t find a way to contact you, so I figured I’d just comment on your most recent post. I noticed that you liked several of my latest posts about my Domestic Violence story on my blog, becomingbeautifultoday.com. I just wanted to reach out and say thank you for your support. It means a lot to me that you connected enough with my story that you came back to keep reading it.
Thanks again,
Laura
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No problem at all. You are most welcome
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Great poetry! You’ve got some great posts on this site, and I really like this. Also, thank you for stopping by my site!
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Thank you and welcome
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You did it again! one more amazing post.. loved it 🙂
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Thank you
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teach me master.
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Frank this is a good poem. I have a concern with a couple of the rhyming couplets.
“He always answered my prayers” could be changed to “He answers every prayer.” This would keep your iambic meter but rhyme more readily with “care”.
Hope that helps.
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Yes, it did. Thank you
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Okay, Frank. That’s my favorite poem, ever. Can I please put it on my Facebook page. I love ya’ Frank! That was awwwweeesssooommeee, to me.
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Of course you can. Thank you
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Beautiful. ❤
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The insistence of the poem drives it forward with force. I like the strong rhythm as well.
miriam
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Hi Frank,
This is really something. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks and welcome
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You are an inspiration.
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So wonderfully done.
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I love this piece!
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Thank you
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You’re welcome.
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Have a nice day
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Thanks and I hope that today is going great for you!
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Yes indeed. Thanks
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