I gave you my heart, I gave you my soul
I gave you my time, I gave you my all
I still asked you just to be sure
If you needed anything more
…
But you always mocked and laughed
What I gave you was never enough
You wanted me to smile while I bleed
You wanted me to know all that you will need
…
Now it doesn’t matter since you’re gone
You’ve flown away and I’ve moved on
Hope you appreciate his heart and soul
Appreciate him, his time and all
I really enjoy your work! It’s always great to stumble upon something I can relate to. It lets me know I’m not at this alone.
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Thanks. Take care, my friend
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I’m lost for words;they are in your power.
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Haha. Thank you
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You wanted me to smile while I bleed…love it!!
Hope you find someone who deserves you!!!!
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Thanks
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Nice words strong and deep
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Thank you
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It’s cruel how someone learns to love after trying-and-breaking your heart… Beautiful piece, Frank..
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Thank you
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“You wanted me to smile while I bleed” Can’t say it any better than that!
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Thanks
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Hey….. That is awesome brother.
Keep it up!
Stanley
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Thank you
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Guess what? “Pain demands to be felt”. Awesome poem
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Thank you
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….I’m sensing a pattern with these great poems. Gonna send a virtual hug,
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Thank you for that
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What a great piece!! Love it!
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Thank you
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Loved this one.. 🙂
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Thank you
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Did you? For starters. Did she know? Did you make it so obviously known? Like idk… call her by name? Or idk… tell her face to face? Your all? When? How? Did she know? Or did you just leave her questioning her sanity? And how you felt? How did you give it. ‘Your all?’ If you didnt even. Let her know. Why dont you tell me. If she knows?
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It is just a poem that struck me. I have my heart and soul with me
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It is hard. When the person you love. Doesn’t love you back.
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And you would have wrote of a hopeful story, as an income for them too. You basically would’ve done anything for them. Even die. It’s hard. When the person you truly loved. Didnt love you. While you had done, whatever you had to. To let them know. How much they loved you.
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I don’t know who you are Frank. I’m just assuming that’s your name. But I wished you had loved me 🙂 I love more than I get back. I wish I could meet you 🙂 I am quite loyal to those I love. But you’re just… some random blogger. Asides what you write, i dont know you. Nor have i had a boyfriend in a long time. But i am quite faithful to those 🙂 goodnight blogger. Named. Frank.
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Yes, I am Frank. I am certain that you will find true love, the kind of love you need. Good night
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When you are in love, nothing seems big enough to do. I guess lovers are a brave and different breed
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Such a rarity 🙂 i hope I can find a love like that, for me 🙂 I’m tired though ): too tired of loving people. That’s when I found God though 🙂 He made me smile 🙂 I really wish I could have known you. Blogger. Named Frank 🙂 but at least God always loves us 🙂 take care 😇
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You too. Take care, my friend
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It is. I hope no one has to go through it. It can be difficult to be in such a situation
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I like rhymes and poems (: the angels that watch over me cause me to rhyme (: i could never rhyme before then so fine (: rhymes are nice. I’ve mostly just seen demons playing word games with me online :0 now that was not fine ):
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https://www.evernote.com/shard/s638/sh/d6474a05-25f5-4055-a15b-defdc41d52ae/9caa82885d75176fb3aad5a484dee4fd
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Be patient. I am sure the angels will protect you from the demons
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Thanks (: take care, I live in Hawaii, and Guam sounds more like Hawaii to me right about now (: the worlds going crazy these days… sigh 😔 stay safe!
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You too. With love, from India
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Why is this so heartbreaking </3
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Yes indeed
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Thank you for liking my post.
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Welcome
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Very good write. Riveting, terrific! Thanks!
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Thank you
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That’s right Frank! Whoop whoop!
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It shows who the better person was..you gave it your all. God knows the heart, karma belongs to the universe…
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Yes but let’s hope for the best for each other
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Of course, but no one escapes the past until paid….
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True but let all be forgotten and forgiven if anyone found himself or herself in such a situation
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I am well aware. My ex husband and I are better at friendship and it took quite a few years to get there. So I can totally relate to the poem.
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Glad to hear that
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But ‘poppy-cock’
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Thank you for sharing your heart. Your words can heal as other see they have not experienced this alone.
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Thank you for the comment. Appreciate it
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I hit the enter button before I finished but this hit me hard. It’s like many draining relationships that need to end because you give beyond yourself. Wonderful piece.
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Thank you so much
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This hit me powerfully. The rhyme
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so the all left to be saved
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….what did she take from you
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I guess it was only as much as I let her take from me
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No one takes anything from us Frank; they take away regret after a while and we are the ones that take with us, a life lesson. Walk on..
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Well I guess that is one way of looking at it
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Omg it’s terrific! Loved how you’ve put the rhyming words in such a casual way 😉
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Thank you
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Smack! Haha, it had to be felt……
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Yeah…
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you sent that cosmic beat down…..truth & then kindness.
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Oh thanks for the comment
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