Let me in, let me in
War’s about to begin
The hour cometh
The army’s marchin’
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Let me in, let me in
I have done no single sin
Open up the gates now
Let me see what’s there within
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Let me in, let me in
Hear me shoutin’ and screamin’
Save me from this torture
They want to burn my skin
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Let me in, let me in
I’ve served my kith and kin
Read all of your scriptures
Come out and examine
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Let me in, let me in
Every minute, I’m growing thin
I’m getting frail and tired
My body is achin’
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Let me in, let me in
I deserve a place therein
I’d like to eat your fruits
And play the violin
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Let me in, let me in
What am I missin’?
Eddie Price got in there
So did Catherine
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Let me in, let me in
Silence is deafenin’
Bring out your arguments
Let’s see who finally wins
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Let me in, let me in
I have done no single sin
Open up the gates now
Let me in, let me in
…
Let me in, let me in
War’s about to begin
The hour cometh
The army’s marchin’
Frank Solanki 
This one is beautiful. Really appreciate it. I have reposted it to my blog.
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Oh thank you
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This is simply tearing up the heart. You have your heart at the tip of your pen, Poet.
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Thank you so much
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Such riveting poetry as always!!
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Thank you
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I like the drum beat of the refrain. Well done, Frank.
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Thank you
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Lovely piece Frank!
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Thank you
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Frank, all your poems are amazing!!! Truly!!!
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Thank you so much
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Frank! Great poem. I love the imagery and the language you use.
I wanted to reach out to you and see if you would be willing to contribute to PresserPoets? I know you read my article with all of the information. We’d be honored to have you contribute a post, or more, and be a part of that community! Feel free to email me at confessionsmalin@gmail.com and I can set you up with Jaime.
Hope you’re well!
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This is incredible ❤
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Thank you
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Love this
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Thank you
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Amazing poem !!
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Thank you
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Thank you Frank
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Well written, Frank! I’m looking forward to read more of your posts.
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Thank you. Hope you like them
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I do like them! Good day to you!
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A nice day to you too
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🙂
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Wonderful piece.
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Thank you
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Very well written. So aptly put.
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Thank you
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Extremely vivid
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Thank you
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Wonderful poem!
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Thank you
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I really enjoy reading your poetry. It’s so lyrical and always thought-provoking! Thank you!
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Thanks and welcome
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Great Poem Frank! Sounds like you have been reading the book of Job!!
Dwight
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Thanks
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