Hey girl, there’s something I want
To say to you
It’s quite apparent, isn’t it?
My jaws just drop, my eyes pop out
Whenever I set my happy eyes on you
…
But it’s not because you’re beautiful
Or simple or sweet
Neither pretty nor cute
My eyes do hurt, my jaws do drop
And I realise my worth
Whenever you are near or around because you look
Like a ghost from my darkest imaginations
And sometimes like a monster and a calamity
…
Just a little suggestion for you
Try wearing a mask
If you can
Take my little advice
Who knows it just might help you
To look less like a dinosaur
For a moment expected to drawn in Romance…..
Great poem 👏👏
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WOW! This poem is AMAZING! Everything that you said is true! I love this poem a lot! 🙂
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Your welcome! 😊
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Thank you!
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This took an unexpected turn, love it. 💖
Sent from my iPhone
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😂 I like this!
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Haha. Dinosaurs are cute.
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Yup. Maybe not this one
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, so maybe not.
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I like it. A bit harsh though. I wonder if it’s based on experience…
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It’s based on wordplay
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Thumbs up for this!
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Yikes, Frank. Word play or not, this is a mean little verse.
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That’s how it is
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Maybe she’ll put a dinosaur mask on 😉
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That’s already on
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hey frank, good transition from romantic to sarcastic… that was really funny 😛
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I enjoyed this piece.
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Thank you
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You’re so welcome & it’s a pleasure!
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Take care, my friend and have a nice day
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Thank you Dear and you do the same!
“Namastè & One Love”❤️💛💚
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Love to you too
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Hey, I have nominated you for the Versatile blogger award. Congrats!!
Here is the link: https://meliorateblog.wordpress.com/2017/06/08/versatile-blogger-award/
I really admire your writings. Write on!
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Oh thank you
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Well that was a pretty intense reading experience!
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lmao the last one though 😂 😂
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It’s actually cool , I really liked the way you played with the words …
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Love this poem, amazing turnaround! Actually, this is my only way to contact you since I don’t see any other tabs. I wanted to say that I nominated you and 10 others for the “Sunshine Blogger Award” which is dedicated to blogs that are creative, positive, inspirational, or uplifting. And your blog has been one of my all time favorites for its creative aspect. So if you want, I can give you the guidelines? I know it is often given to new bloggers – and sometimes bigger bloggers – but it is the least I could do to show appreciation of your work.
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Oh thank you so much. Appreciate it
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You are welcome! If you wish to carry it on to others, here are the guidelines: https://creativethinkingwell.wordpress.com/2017/06/08/nomination-for-the-sunshine-blogger-award/
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Quite… unexpected…!😅
Good one, though!👍
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This is brilliant. I quite enjoyed this.
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That was unexpected but funny 😊
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Welcome 😊
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Have a nice day
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Thank you and you too 😊
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This is refreshing and cute poem. 🙂
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Yw:)
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Reblogged this on Simple girl and commented:
This poem hit me right through the heart…
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Coming from a background where books weren’t in abundance and reading wasn’t a pastime poetry wasn’t something discussed.
That began to change for me when I was given a copy of Walt Whitman’s epic Leaves of Grass by an elderly white couple who were retired teachers.
Whether Whitman’s Leaves of Grass is considered poetry, prose, or something else it read like poetry to me and was something of an awakening.
Life often takes you in different directions so my knowledge of poetry was limited for some time.
By the time I had reached adulthood books and become something of an essential, and I began to rediscover poetry.
I have as much of an appreciation for poetry as an art form as I do any other – a world devoid of art in it’s many manifestations would be a sterile world.
Life is poetry, the environment is poetry, and so too words can be as well.
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So true. Your views are beautiful
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👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
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Cute poem..love it..
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Frank, you have a flair for expression. This is great.
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