Travelled I have to space and beyond
Been to the future and back
Visited the past in memories so fond
Without having ever to unpack
…
Wherever my feet have led me
In all of water, air and land
Not a girl am I yet to see
More exquisite than thy hand
…
Your voice fills the atmosphere
The stars bow as you nod
Flowers pave a path so clear
Are you woman or God?
Hm hm ^-^
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Was Jesus Christ just a man? Or was He born of God? Was He one of God’s Children? People worshipped Him like God, but was He not… just a human? Nobody alive today, knows the truth about Jesus. Was He God in the flesh? Or was He a man? Wars are built on this. But nobody can go back in time to know the truth of it. Probably the best question.
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Good question, hm. Some nobody, woman, named Kalyn 🙂
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Good question. My name’s Kalyn 😊
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Beautiful (: even Mary was just a girl (: who fled when there were people being mean to her (:
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Thanks
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Neither woman nor God! It’s the Sun! YESS! I cracked the riddle!
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Haha. Finally…
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Shamelss – but can I use this in my great internet novel and could you think of a pseudonym for a great space poet – I’ll put a link to this on the quote. thx
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No sir. You cannot reproduce any of my works or even part thereof for any purpose, commercial or not
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Wow. It got me wondering myself.
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Thank you
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Really nice one. Loved it.
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Thank you
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Awesome art work! I so much love your mastery of words.
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Thank you
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And thanks for reading my posts.
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Welcome. Have a nice day, my friend
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thanks! I just discovered i need a little help around this, how do I activate all comments. Just realized I had some comments as trash some few minutes ago
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I face the same issue. I have to manually untrash them
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Ooops! alright, thanks again
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Take care
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Interesting
there is only one God in my eyes 🙂 and that God had His Son Jesus. Anyone who claims to be anything asides the name they are given, a human, well, haha they really wouldn’t be right
I like the humility, mm, but not the worship of this woman ): only God alone deserves that sort of praise >.< anyone else is merely human! But still flattering, to the woman portrayed 🙂 have a pleasant day!
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Very enjoyable read. Thank you
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Welcome. Have a nice day
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Both equally as complicated.
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So true
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“Visited the past in memories so fond
Without having ever to unpack”
well written
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Thank you
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Beautiful poetry Frank
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Thank you
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I hope you’ve shown her this poem. Women need poetry — especially when it is about them.
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It’s there for all to see
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Beautiful! This conveys so much about the woman who inspired it and it’s so nice to see someone appreciate the worth of another human.
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Loved it
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You have an awesome blog page!
Thanks for dropping by and liked my post. Bless you.
Rose
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Thank you. Wish you the same
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Thanks so much for liking “Coffee, Mountains and Adventure” ,I really really appreciate it.
It’s great to read your poems as well I Love to read them all if i have time. Best wishes for always, safe travels!
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Thank you so much. Keep up the good work
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It’s very beautiful 🙂
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Such a beautiful poem. Lucky she is, for whom it’s written!
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Thank you
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Did you just watch Wonder Woman? 😛
Anyway, great poem. Beaucoup feels. Reads like a throwback to old-fashioned romantic poetry, with your own frank (pardon the pun, can’t resist) style incorporated. You’ve twisted the divinity trope into wistful, earnest verse.
Can’t help smiling. 😀 Nice work, Frank.
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Thank you so much. Appreciate your comment
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Your inspiration is a very lucky woman. Lovely!
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Thank you
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My pleasure!
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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There be but one God. 😉
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And a Goddess
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This is so beautiful! I love everything you said in this poem!
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Thank you
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Your welcome! 🙂
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Have a nice day, my friend
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Thank you! 🙂
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