​Woman Or God?

~ Frank Solanki

Travelled I have to space and beyond

Been to the future and back

Visited the past in memories so fond

Without having ever to unpack

…

Wherever my feet have led me

In all of water, air and land

Not a girl am I yet to see

More exquisite than thy hand

…

Your voice fills the atmosphere

The stars bow as you nod

Flowers pave a path so clear

Are you woman or God?

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Published by Frank Solanki

If you want to be a hero well just follow me

57 thoughts on “​Woman Or God?”

  4. Did you just watch Wonder Woman? 😛
    Anyway, great poem. Beaucoup feels. Reads like a throwback to old-fashioned romantic poetry, with your own frank (pardon the pun, can’t resist) style incorporated. You’ve twisted the divinity trope into wistful, earnest verse.
    Can’t help smiling. 😀 Nice work, Frank.

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  7. Thanks so much for liking “Coffee, Mountains and Adventure” ,I really really appreciate it.
    It’s great to read your poems as well I Love to read them all if i have time. Best wishes for always, safe travels!

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  10. Beautiful! This conveys so much about the woman who inspired it and it’s so nice to see someone appreciate the worth of another human.

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  16. Interesting :/ there is only one God in my eyes 🙂 and that God had His Son Jesus. Anyone who claims to be anything asides the name they are given, a human, well, haha they really wouldn’t be right :/ I like the humility, mm, but not the worship of this woman ): only God alone deserves that sort of praise >.< anyone else is merely human! But still flattering, to the woman portrayed 🙂 have a pleasant day!

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  20. Shamelss – but can I use this in my great internet novel and could you think of a pseudonym for a great space poet – I’ll put a link to this on the quote. thx

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