I walked around with a gun in my hand
Looking for Peace
Please, please, please
Would someone show me Peace?
…
I met a boy and I asked him
If he had any Peace
He said, “I only have a little drum for a toy
I play it all the time
It helps the day pass away
But Peace? No, Sir. I haven’t heard of that toy
You might as well go ahead and ask some other boy”
…
I went ahead with a gun in my hand
Looking for Peace
Please, please, please
Would someone give me Peace?
…
I met a young lady
Walking with her man
Happy and smiling
She must know Peace then
I asked her if she knew where I could find Peace
“Peace?”, she said, “I only know Stan
Why would I keep tabs about any other man?
But if you are looking for a lost friend
You might find him in that shrine
Everyone finds everything there”
…
I went to the shrine with a gun in my hand
Looking for Peace
Please, please, please
Would someone bring me Peace?
…
I looked around the shrine
There was nobody there but me
And my faithful shadow
Who refused to leave
The winds made the bells ring
My heart began to beat
I sat there with Silence
While I threw my gun away
My shadow left to grab it
Peace came to stay
Actually, you didn’t follow me, but you liked something of mine. Thank you for that!
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I like your style! Thanks for following me, too x
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I know I’m a little late but I really do like your work. It is good!
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It’s never too late to appreciate a fine piece of art. Thank you
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This is truly beautiful…
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Thank you
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It really is ironic how we run around with guns and bombs claiming we are keeping the peace! You are right peace begins with the attitude of the heart! Great poem Frank!
Dwight
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Thank you
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Thanks! Peace, peace, peace. Loved the poem! Some people spend their whole lives disacknowledging their shadow selves instead of absorbing it and dealing with it. The answer to peace is ‘being it’ and letting go of what keeps you stuck.
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True. Thank you
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Surreal and phenomenal, loved it. 😊😊😊
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Thank you
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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It’s easy to see why you have so many followers. Thought-provoking work draws people in. I am looking forward to exploring more if your blog entries. Thanks for your click on my “JanBeek” – Love One Another.
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Cheers. Have a nice day
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❤️
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I love the shadow leaving to grab the gun you threw away. Fantastic writing. May the Prince of Peace overwhelm and keep you.
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Thank you
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😊
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This is brilliant Frank! Love it ❤
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Thank you
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Thank you Frank * intensely beautiful read
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Thanks and welcome
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Awesome piece of poetry. Very well put.
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Thank you
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My pleasure!
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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You too, have a good night
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This is incredibly deep.
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on nerdhertz.
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I was humming a little melody in my head while reading this. 🙂 Brilliant piece!
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Thanks
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Nice
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Thanks
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Wow, powerful!
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Thank you
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Frank, thanks for the love on my post. This is really great, I’d love to have you as a guest writer on my site if you ever get a chance to network a bit!
http://www.katalystkonnect.wordpress.com
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Thanks
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Awesome…
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Thanks
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My pleasure!
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Wow. Deep.
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Love the peace ,peace peace
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Thanks
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excellent work on this one Frank ❤
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Thanks a lot
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Send this to NRA.
Lovely Frank.
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Thank you
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Wow! This is amazing!! 🙂
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Thank you
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What a wonderful poem! I love when you read something that forces you to stop and think for a moment!
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Thank you
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WOWWWWW
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Thank you
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Most welcome
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One of your best!
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Thank you so much
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Excellent poem for the world today. Can’t trump that one.
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Holy…wow. I did not expect that ending. Awesome, Frank. ❤
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Thank you
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You’re so welcome. 🙂
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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Thank you! You as well ❤
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GREAT ending … shadow & gun leaving you with Peace … beautiful!
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Thanks a lot
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You are the most talented poet I know …this is something else 💖
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Thank you so much
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Hi, its mee again. Hardest stuff in poesy is (now why is this not plural? “Stuff” refers to plural! But No! I need a grammar master n I gotta do away w/parens!) …is refrains n pantoums. You nailed the refrain!
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This post was amazingly creative, and I enjoyed it so much. There is so much there that you can read between the lines, at least for me. Thank you!
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Welcome
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Very inventive! Look fwd to read more. Course my stuff is antique form, new subject. I believe I am sola in my niche! Really meter/rhyme + big words best n humor i seem to be one of few that fits in humor! Now all i gotta do is feel somting humorous! Warmest, n thanx! Mary
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Thanks and welcome
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I love this, Frank! Then again I love all your work – such depth.
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Thank you so much
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I love the imagery brought on by the boy and his drum. Great work!
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Thanks
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Excellent Frank, is this a song? If not, it should be! 🙂
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Not a song. But you can sing it
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It certainly reads like lyrics – and great ones at that 🙂
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This
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Nice one frank luke that alot
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Thank you
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I love this so much. ❤
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Thank you
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