I wrote a hundred poems for her
She loved the first
She liked the second too
But then she couldn’t tell
Number fifty eight from seventy two
Neither did she have a clue
About ‘Diamond Dew’
So I’ll start anew
Change my point of view
And may be write about my nephew
Haha, love it! Unfortunately, I think only we, as writers, don’t forget our own work, hopefully.
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Yeah hopefully
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LOL. #nice
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Ha! That’s brilliant. Very good.
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I loved him enough to have written a million things
But it would never have resulted in any diamond rings
He broke my soul in a million parts
He trampled my hopes and shattered my heart.
Laterv he met another and they were married
While I went to college where I Toiled and felt harried ,
Butt I got my degree and got great jobs on the air
He stayed where he was, had kids and felt it unfair
That we’d both persued our dreams but his felt so rude
So he called me years later and and said hey its your dude!
I said I’m your ex-girlfriend and you can get screwed!
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Cool
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Haha.. indeed write about your nephew now, change things up a bit. Like your poems
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simply brilliant and funny… maybe your nephew will be able to tell apart from poem number 58 to 72 🙂 🙂
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Thank you
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Beautifully written! I was smiling throughout 🙂
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Thanks a lot
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Wow this was really cute 😊
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Once again, you charmed.
With a mixture of Fun, Pain and simplicity.
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I love the humor in this!
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Thank you
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Most welcome. ^^
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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Thank you and I hope you have a great week ahead! 🙂
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You too!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Don’t feel bad, my family is tired of hearing the songs I write and my poems, too. If I made some money friends might perk up a little. lol. I get a great deal of pleasure out of writing. I do it for me, it’s my love.
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Glad to hear that. Keep it up
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Fantastic! Really made me laugh! I think all poets have been there!!!
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True. Thanks
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Creative! Funny 😀
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Hahahahaha it’s gets a bit like that doesn’t it! 🙂 I drive my husband and i to this point to so i feel you! hahahaha
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It does
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That made me crack up.
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Wow. Cool
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Diamond Dew…great imagery there. I like that her cluelessness doesn’t hold you back. New audience, new point of view.
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‘Diamond Dew’ is actually a poem of mine
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I bet it’s beautiful as the title alone conjures up some wonderful imagery.
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It is. At least I think so
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Clever and sweet.
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Reminds me of a saying.”If you write five sonnets for her, you love her. If you write six hundred sonnets for her, you love sonnets.” By the way, I nominated you for this award, because I regularly read your blog.
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Thanks for that. Appreciate it
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To the point! Good one, I’m sure the nephew will appreciate it much better 😁🙌
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Indeed. Thanks
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Hahaha nice one. Nephew is the lucky fellow here.
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Thanks
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Welcome
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Haha.. Good one 😀
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Thank you
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Wonderful work! Love it. 😀
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Thank you
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Haha, nice one!
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Thanks
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Welcome!!
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Love it- very creative!
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Thank you
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Why nephew out of all people?
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‘Niece’ doesn’t rhyme with ‘you’
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That’s true 🙂
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Yup. It is
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I like it keep on writing
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This one is really cool😂
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Thank you
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You’re welcome!
I wish you all the luck in your life..
Keep Writing!
Keep Smiling! 🙂
Akiraa
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Thank you so much. Wish you the same
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maybe your nephew wouldn’t lost count…
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Yes, he won’t
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hahaha…good!
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