Every smile of hers was a blade
Cutting through each and every vein
The more it hurt, the more I would want
To feel the pain again
Oppurtunities slipped through my fingers
I never could quite express
How beautiful her eyes were
How lovely was her dress
She wrote me a letter once
We must be barely ten
She wanted to be friends with me
She found me cute back then
We became friends, talked a little
But it never really got too far
She forgot all about me and my heart
And left us as we are
How I wish that she could see
How I wish that she would know
I still read that letter everyday
It’s right there under my pillow
As with the divine influence, we all need that sense of security from an angel. Good job on this piece.
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Thanks a lot
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your welcome
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I love this, you inspired me to write one myself…gonna see how much can fit. I just read a poem that made me kind of want to cry. It was about an angel; one that fell out of the sky. An angel loved, an angel lost, an angel held so dear. An angel this man cried for, and remembered over the years. These angels, we all have them. The loves we don’t forget. Some friends, some more, some here, some gone, some family, some we never met. Maybe I’m somebody’s angel. I was told that, once. I hope that person’s doing fine with or without his ‘us’. We live, we learn. We laugh, we cry. We live each day we have. Make each day a full one, friend, for it could be your last.
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Your words are deep and quite true. Appreciate your message. Thanks. Have a nice day
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Wow, just wow.
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Thank you
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LOVELY! ❤
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Thank you
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Welcome
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You write beautifully Frank!
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Thank you so much
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Love this
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Thanks
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You’re welcome
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Reblogged this on thatnewcrunchymom and commented:
I love this, I wish I could write poetry.
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Thank you so much. I wish I could too
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What do you mean? Is this not poetry? 🙂
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It is. I just wish I could be better at it
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Well this is beautiful! 🙂 It reminded me of being young and not knowing who I would end up with. Very nostalgic. You are brave for putting yourself out there. I have one or two in my notebook and I’m way too scared to put it up.
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Put it out. I am sure it would be beautiful too
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I’ll see if I can find it. 🙂 I think that would be fun and I hope other people might think so too.
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They will. Good luck
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I’m 99% certain I am crazy. :O I just hit publish and am freaking out.
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You are 1% right
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You thought it was okay? 😀
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I couldn’t find it. The latest post I could see of yours is Kidisms. If possible, could you drop a link?
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Sure 🙂 I posted it on my old blog so that’s probably why! https://thatnewcrunchymom.wordpress.com/2017/03/25/love-war/
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Well done. Looking forward for more
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:O Thank you!! I think I have one or two more stashed somewhere.
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Only you can do you
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I guess so. Thanks
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Nice!
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Thanks
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My pleasure!
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I loved this! Brilliant and heartfelt!
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Thanks
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