If everyone knew love’s worth
I’d be the richest man on earth
For she gave me more than I can take
And never led my heart to break
I wish I had done the same in return
When, to show true love, ’twas my turn
But it’s now far too late
To turn back the clock and our fate
Today she sleeps on heaven’s bed
Lives on in my heart and in my head
A beautiful poem. Beauty lies in its core.
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Lovely and bittersweet. A little bit of subtle advice too … looking for more!
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beautiful…
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Something almost lyrical to your work. Nicely done.
Greetings from Texas,
LK
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Poetry is a window into the heart and soul. Thank you for opening your window.
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Welcome. Glad to hear that
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Changed forever.
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True
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Nice 😊
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Anytime.
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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Thanks bro you t
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Nice work.
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Simple yet great storytelling.
Wonderful work you are doing here 😊
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Truly, lovely.
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beautiful writing
lines touch heart as you read it
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Thank you so much
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Your poetry is touching, my friend. It reveals depth of soul.
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Beautifully poignant.
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Thank you for visiting ThusNSuch.🌷
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Pleasure’s all mine
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Beautiful but so sad. 😦
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Indeed
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So deep and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
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Welcome
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Thanks for liking my post⭐️🇺🇸
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Oh! Very sad. It’s very heartbreaking when someone whom we love a lot just leaves us forever! Emotional but still very good poem! Keep it going…
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Thanks a lot
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You’re welcome. And I’ll be very grateful to you if you visit my blog too. I hope you will.
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I read ‘Within Me’ and ‘Paradise Unleashed’. They both are quite a piece of work. Well done
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Very grateful to you. I’m glad you liked those two.
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Take care, my friend
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Very grateful to you!
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Have a nice day
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Same to you!
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Heartbreaking!
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Indeed
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Another nice effort.
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Beautiful writing! Love your style!
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Put this to music, Frank. The words are touching enough, however. Nice work.
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Hey, I totally love your tagline👏😁 and very beautifully written, first 2lines were superb😍❤
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Thank you so much
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Most welcome!
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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Wow, I feel so good vibes! You too🎉have a great day❄😇💞
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So sad and beautiful!
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Lovely.
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Thank you
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The mix of love and regret results in beautiful poems.
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Yes. Indeed. Thanks
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wow….words can make magic..
and thanks for liking my blog…it really means a lot..and it is a lot of motivation. i am a beginner ,so it is really encouraging to see people like you seeing my blog.
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Thanks and welcome
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I’m enjoying this whole series.
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Very beautiful!!
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Thank you
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Welcome!!
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Lovely poem, sad but touching
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Simple beautiful.
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sweeeeet stuff you got here man
keep it coming, and thanks for showing some love to one of my works as well.
Cheers mate!
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Cheers. Have a nice day
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wow. good work
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Oh, too sad.
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Indeed
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Beautiful!
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Oh no.
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Yeah, quite unfortunate
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